You’re awesome. Great story. Really interesting ideas and spins on the story line that I loved, THANK YOU ~ ヾ(︶)ﾉ

I've read this fanfiction almost ten times already, and every time it still brings out the same emotions. You did an amazing job with the writing, character development, and everything else, that I can't get over just clicking on this story just once more.

So, great job.

I LOVED your fic! I got to read it all in one sitting as you’ve already completed it and judging by your notes, it seems you weren’t sure if you’d continue. Well I’d like to just say THANK YOU for continuing. It was incredible and I personally LOVED it. You’re awesome. Great story. Really interesting ideas and spins on the story line that I loved. :)

Thank you

absolutely beautiful!

One of my favorite and best Naruto fanfiction hands down. Thank you for taking up the challenge given out and creating this piece of literature. It’s 2019 but I’m glad I found this fix after 8 years.

I just have to say that I like the way you keep putting them in embarrassing situations, it's not just the stereotypical, boring old relationship, it has funny moments, emotional and physical tidbits, and I haven't even gotten far enough in the story for them to be together yet. I can't wait to see how much more is in store.

Every time I read Sasuke’s thoughts, I feel like I’m losing brain cells. Everything he thinks is just so daft. Like yes, Naruto’s tailed beast helps him out, but so does your Sharingan. You’d both be less without them, so why play the “if you didn’t have a tailed beast” game. It’s just so moronic. All of his “logic” could be applied to literally anyone who uses Kekkei Genkai.
(I know this was the intention, so it was a job well done lol)
Also, Itachi really should help his brother find the right path. Sasuke is obviously incapable of thinking like a normal person.

Sasuke really has a Problem, till ch16 where im right now he is stupid acts like a three year old, does dirty Work of other and thinks he is clever...

One thing i always so wonder Till this chap...where is ibiki...he is head of black oops (those who only Accept and work for Kage and protect them...they are those Shadow Guys who protect the kage in the Tower in the Office and when Walking in Town or traveliing)head of anbu , head of i and torture...
So he should have a Meeting with him

Also he should have a Meeting with the Clan Heads, the heads of anbu groups, of chinobi, the teacher, ...Hunter nin and so on

Also what happened to. The guards in Front of the kage Office or the Tower...
As it sounds there are only some shinobi in Town as naru only talks and uses some of His Friends... But there are people like the nara or yamanaka and so on the Parents who are head of there work who He also did not Talk too.

And He should Work Out a hidden defence protection and around Town that foes cant even Go. In without getting trapped and shakra bound fully.

This story is very well written. I absolutely love its plot and the characters, and I cannot wait to see what happens next!

An AMAZING story evaaaaaaa!

While I don't usually write reviews, I felt the need to make one for this wonderful work. I loved it. To be honest, I presumed – at first – that I would grow tired of this fanfiction midway through the story but no, it was beautiful in every way possible. The way you wrote the characters skillfully without making it seem too out of character is a very hard ability to achieve. I liked that Itachi's and Naruto's relationship wasn't the main focus and also not too rushed. While I love the pairing, I loved your plot even more and that's why I'm glad this story didn't turn out to be one of those I would like to phrase as insufficient. Many stories are made because of the author's love for a pairing, but, eventually when they've grown tired of it – the plot will inevitably become poorer in all ways. However, this story maintained everything I loved to its end. This is the first work with over 250k words which I've completed reading. Thank you for the wonderful experience.

Ok a question, taka means hawk right? Not falcon.

And doesn't itachi summon crows? Not ravens? I'm just saying.

as that story was amazing! wow! I love how you developed itachis character! from having no reason to live to being free of his burdens. the fight against madara was good, though I had hoped they'd fight together in the end. O h well it was still very exciting! I'm glad you managed to make sasuke b livable and redeemable most of all, and I really liked karasu as well. though I wonder why they didn't show up in the end. the story was really touching and I'm glad you shared this. thank you

Just finished and loved your story. About to check your profile in hopes of finding more content too.