I absolutely loved this story, usually I would comment on more chapters but even if I could have stopped reading long enough to do so I didn’t have internet and I had the story downloaded. Anyway this was one of the best Narnia fics ever! You are very talented.

Thank you for this. Though I'm pretty new to this fandom, this is probably the best I've seen by a long shot. But thanks for this fic, and I hope I see more like this, because it's fantastic!

Hi!

I don't know if I've already said "I love this fic' ! And the end is soooo cute ;_;"
But too short ! It was so cool, so I'd have loved it to continue a bit _

I'm sorry, but why is this story marked complete? Anyways this fic is wonderful I love Edmund and Jack together 3

oh good! happy ending. I like happy endings! :) was slightly worried about being let down with a :'( ending for a little while there.

i think you shoud redo it with susan/caspian, him and peter was wrong. i found it confusing, it was ok though just not the pairing

wow...u did a good job on this story...i got tears coming down my eyes from reading the ending part...soo beautiful...

Awesome

Aw, that's too bad

I really wish they didn't have to leave each other. It's sad

Aw, poor Peter

Really cute

Aw, so cute

Awesome

Aw, so cute