i loved it

Hey this made a lot of sense! and it was really good! (sorry to point out the obivious) But really i thought you captured Judai and Haou really well! keep up the great writting!

O...Yay! Another Painshipping fic! (aka Selfshipping or HaouXJudai) Though, this one was a bit more confusing...Nonetheless it was great! And I love how you made Haou so determined and all that! So cute! And I love how he held him and said 'I love you...'! Wah! Though this fic contained a bit of sadness, especially at the end. TTTT But, great story anyways! Absolutely love it!

Wow, that was really good. I love how you describe everything! I really love your writing. I don't think it's OOC at all. Wonderful job!

You bet it makes sense and is totally not OOC. At least to me. And gods how I missed symbolism~ w Seriously, it's hard to find stories like this one... most of the stories are usually painfully literal and you get either fluff or total angst or just plain lemons . (countsherselfintothecathegory) And this was just... yeah. I'm freaking envious of how you're able to word everything the right way... I remember how much I ended up failing with my Egocentrism

Wow!I really like Haou! and you make Haou and Jaden really cool, ,if you make fic just make HaouxJaden if you want!

I LOVE IT! I love the way you describe this whole story and the whole simplicity of the plot too! the third last paragraph has definitely gotta be my favourite part! I think I'm growing to love this pairing more and more XD keep up the great work!

YAY! I love this shipping! And this was somewhat touching! *_*

There are no words for the awesomeness of this fic. *_*

LOVE LOVE LOVE XD Oh, and I thought the characterzation was pretty well-done, too. Not perfect, but very good. ;) I LOVE IT AS MUCH AS MY JADEN CLOCK LOL XD