That was really good but also really damn sad. Cursed blade, huh?

So tragic!

That was good! I feel bad that the tactician had to die. He/she is my favorite character!

Genderless tacticians rule XD

I saw a few errors in her. For example: It's actually Nergal, not Negral. I saw some other errors here, but they don't really matter. I liked your plot :D I thought it was really said when Mark/Katt (tactician) died. I nearly cried. And when I cry is not funny (because I never cry).

Keep up the good work! _

I'll add it to my favorites when I'm actually bothered to log in XD

OMG!

I almost cry with this story poor tactician T.T he/she didn't deserve that!

This was pretty good. Will you make the next chapter?

Spell check. There are some key spelling mistakes and if I'm not mistaken, the antagonist's name is Nergal, not Negral.

that was great! It was a little hard to understand though. You should make a sequel where they do fight the dragon.

Very good story. It had good narration, and the storyline was great.

Plus, I don't think I haven't seen this scenario before. Thus, it's a plus for your story.

Please make the sequel, where they meet the dragon.

You spelled 'Nergal' wrong...

But lol, fighting a dragon without a tactician. I kinda laughed at that. Eliwood and his friends are screwed! -Thumbs up-

Wow.

That's quite a feat to write the whole story with a genderless tactician.

Excellent job.

great job