Good riddance, Rose.

Paige sounds like a teenage girl from movies.

Let's hope Chase isn't like his dad, Dean. Dean was controlling, possessive, and overly protective of someone (Ginny Weasley) that didn't even need to be protected.

Lavender should've just said 'One can't make you feel inferior without your consent.'

Personally, I would've murdered Kingsley, Hermione, Ron, Draco, and Astoria and have the betrothed hide the bodies.

Love the chapter it was the best

This is coooool

Love t(e story

Good

... oops i read it again, to be real, this story is soo good, i really enjoyed it because i looove your writing style and themes you played with, it's a very solid story, i really love it ! Thank you so much for taking the time to write it, it's awesome ! xx

THIS IS SOOOOOOO FREAKING GOOD. THE PLOT HAD ME ON THE EDGE OF MY DEAL AND I COULDN'T PUT IT DOWN.

Since you want to be a professional writer according to your bio. Please watch the consistency. You have Lavender gushing about Rose's only Weasley feature - her blue eyes - and since then have mentioned her brown eyes a few times in following chapters.

I'm not quite certain what made Scorpius warm up to Rose; Rose has this gradual development going on but Scorpius? Where did that come from?

Also, I'm not sure about these forced marriages. It kind of makes sense with Dramione pairing as it's extremely unlikely that those two would choose one another but all of JK's indications since the last book came out viewed this pairing as a likely possibility so why such extreme measures?

And just btw on one of your author notes: Bella is not lucky; she is a heroine with no personality and Edward is not a romantic hero but an abusing controlling jerk. Bella would be a great test subject for victimologists. How do people not see this? Go on any website for one of those charities that help victims of domestic violence and see the symptoms. Edward is an abuser, I've no idea what on earth was happening in Meyer's head.

You said in the second chapter that Rose had blue eyes. Lavender commented on that. Now she has brown eyes. Don't you have your main character in your mind's eye when you set out to write about her?

OMG this is amazing. Love it love it love it.

Ohhhh the way rose reacted at the betrothal and the paper being signed made my heart break, she was crying and then scorpius is such a jerk...
Your writing is marvellous