Please update. It's getting interesting

Plllleeeaaasssseeee update its been nearly 11 years!
I was 5 when you last updated ;-;
That's baaaahhhd :/
This is the best fanfic I've ever read and I read 6 different fandoms...
Please update for me *puppy dog eyes*

Hey, isn't Mundungus Fletcher the really shady and sozzled thief in the Order? If you put him in another role on purpose, oh well, but if you hadn't noticed...
Anyway, great story, keep on writing!:)

what? you no continue? i wanna read it still? *chibi crying* I'm sad. *chibi bawling* WHY GOD?! WHY?!

i love this story. it's like you ate 40 packets of sugar and went on a rampage. Truly awe inspiring. I bow down to you.

This is probably in vane due to the lack of updates for around SIX frickin years but hey I'm going to try anyway. Awsome story, please update.

good, keep it going

please please please finish this story! please? this is so amazing, i've never read any HP fiction so cool! Honestly! please finish it!

This is a fun and interesting story so far. You have not touched on any of Harry's animagus forms yet as far as him transforming...hope to see that before long. Please update soon.

“In all reality, next to Pluto, Mercury is the coldest planet in this solar system.”...um...Last I knew Mercury was right beside the sun...so...wouldn't it make it the HOTTEST planet in the solar system?

Hi. Just one comment. You should probably try to get a beta, or use the grammar checker that comes with Microsoft Word. Your grammar is mostly good, but there are a few things here and there that you should probably fix. For example, you mixed up "except" with "accept".

Otherwise, this story is very good so far.

Um... Why are you calling Bellatrix Lestrange "Lenda"? That seems really wierd, like calling renaming Harry Potter to be Gregory. Also, here husband is Rastaban, I believe

I can't help but say that I am disappointed with this story.

The idea is great and all, but there are just too many inconsistencies to make it a good read. For instance, Harry wacks his head against the wall and is not hurt but then when punched he is hurt.

Another thing, when harry is in the attic after the explosion, why does he not just jump out of the hole in the roof, seeing as he is quite able?

But that is just by the way. What annoys me most is the way your characters deal with situations. Death and peril can stare them in the face, but they calmly hold a time consuming conversation instead of rushing.

Commotion can fill the room next door, but the characters ask "what is going on" instead of actually looking what is causing it.

You should really try to align your scene lengths to the time things would actually take in the real world. You have isolated scenes too much; like what is happening in the kitchen does not effect those in the living room until about two paragraphs of script.

Don't take this as a flame, but I really hope you understand what I am trying to say.

Awesome story I can't wait until the next chapter.

You gotta update this i have read so meny fan fics on this site and yours is by far the best one i have been waiting for a update for over a year now... but ill keep waiting if i have to this story is really good keep up the good work