So I’m enjoying this story so far and I’ve really like it up to this chapter. But one thing puts me off. How could a girl 15 years old be 8 or 9 two years earlier. You could have said she was 12 or 13 two years ago or you could have made her 11. It makes me a bit upset you didn’t have your facts straight. I’ll let it pass for now.

This is the most amazing beautiful perfect sophisticated flawless just fucking perfect fanfiction .
The plot , the characters, the sass , the ending everything is perfect.
Just change a couple of names n pleaseeeeeee publish it u deserve it ...

just too many spelling errors. I cannot. Some of the writing style feels... shallow for lack of a good word. I'm curious about the plot but for some reason can't seem to care about the Hermione Draco development.

Such an awesome story I read it in a day! So lucky u found this

This was a really interesting story and I enjoyed it very much!

Love the storyline and the plot, didn't like the ending :(

I didn't find the ending disappointing at all in fact it was really different and nice. I liked how you wrote the end of hermione and draco's story from ginny's point. One of the better dramione stories that i have read in a while.

Wow...that was one epic story. Student uprising.. Liked the idea, however would have liked to see more of UAV.. Luna, Ernie are completely missing..its a fantastic storyline but could have been so much more... But yes, I understand that life interferes and sometimes inspiration and interest wane and are hard to muster...but good dramione with enormous potential

You really need to watch your grammar and form. For instance, you have a lot of rouge F's within the text. You also don't show me the story and this lends to parts of your story reading like grocery lists. This is a great concept, but you need to spend loads more time in the editing stage to fish out awkward phrasings, silly word mix-ups, and incorrect punctuation. Try Betas or even setting aside the material for at least a week before you go back through it.

Wow, amazing job writing this story! I loved the way you introduced Draco's veela senses, and it was most certainly like a scene from Shakespeare's play. Keep up the great work, I look forward to reading more of your stories.

ur story ws wonderful...i would appreciate if you could do a sequel to it.

lovely story...amazing and interesting dramione story..

I enjoyed your story. Sad that you lost inspiration when it could have been epic. Thank you though for at least tying things up :) tyvm for writing

great story ! i'm a good time to read it !

I LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH. I'm kicking myself for staying up to finish it, but holy crap was it amazing!