Reviews for Trial By Error
OriginalName1 chapter 3 . 4/19/2016
Huh, this is actually pretty cool. But why isn't this in the crossover section?
Fehra chapter 3 . 12/28/2012
Amazing, very cool, awesome story! I love it, it's really, really great! I think that this is one of the best crossovers that I've read. :) Please continue!
Unusually Uninteresting chapter 3 . 8/22/2011
I love this and I hope you will one day continue the story, but I won't be holding my breath. Good stories almost never finish :(
Azraelean chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
Jade court is asian. Are they involved?
FireSenshi2 chapter 3 . 9/6/2010
Definitely keeping my eye on your story! Update soon? :)
Aishuu chapter 3 . 2/17/2009
Very much curious about the mystery you're spinning here. A very fun, charming read, and I really can't wait to see how things happen when Kisuke and Harry meet.
RefurAG chapter 3 . 1/20/2009
Oh man, I was so disapointed when I saw there were no more chapters... I'm loving this story so I really hope you haven't given up on it.
Agent-G chapter 3 . 11/3/2008
Well I have to say that this is one of the more original crossover ideas (that actually work) that I've read on this site. I also really enjoy how you've been keeping everyone very in character they're really close to what you see and read about especially Harry in this.

I missed the author's note at first but going back thankfully I found it so I know about the timeline now. I'm kind of interested to see just what happened when these people keep up with each other now. I can't wait to see what you come up with next and you can expect me to stick with the story as well.
GG Crono chapter 3 . 10/29/2008
Not too shabby. Not too shabby at all. I'll keep an eye on this one. :)
Dark Puck chapter 3 . 10/29/2008
Hey! This is very well done, and I like how you've predated it to pre-show events.

Also, you've got Urahara bang to rights. :D
Vi chapter 3 . 10/21/2008
um, this fic is nice, but its painful slow so far, okay i'm probaly exagerating there, but seriosly, at least let them meet already!
sabresedge chapter 3 . 10/15/2008
I LOVE IT! FINALY a bleach Dresden Fanfic. Both Bleach and Dresden are awesome! and You have put the together so well. i can't wait and am ding to see more. _
Ppleater chapter 3 . 9/15/2008
Very interesting. I like where this is going. You spelled ventas servitas wrong though btw, just thought I'd mention that. Keep up the good work.
nimblnymph chapter 3 . 9/9/2008
Oh, wow... where to start?

Okay, let's start with the edits you made: Awesome! They were only little things, but those little things perfected the chapter. Not a single spelling, grammar or structure critique to make on it. It makes me incredibly happy that you DO care about the presentation of this fic. It really shows and it makes reading it even more enjoyable than it already is.

Now, since that technical bit is out of the way... time to rub in how incredibly clever you are! Seriously, if it were anyone but you to write this sort of crossover I don't think it would have worked. You have such and amazing talent for taking ideas that are so outside the box and making them work that I do feel envious. It's fantastically creative and it's done EXACTLY as it should be! Bravo, my darling.

Characterization, everyone is on point. Harry's suitably edgy yet human, Kisuke is adorable and shrewd, Yoruichi is tough without being callouse... Have I told you yet that you've got Kisuke nailed PERFECTLY? Those genius type characters can be so hard to write sometimes, but you've got him down like you've plopped a cot inside his head and made your home there! Again, a little green monster is coming out on my end.

Story wise... Freakin' awesome! Harry's thoughts later about his first run in with a Hollow should be interesting. Yoruichi and Kisuke in Chicago also promises some fun. PLEASE have Kisuke make them stop for deep dish pizza! *grins* A silly request, but I could so see that happening.

Anyway, can't wait for more. Must get coffee now. And go to work. Ew.
0ct0pus chapter 2 . 7/27/2008
Man, this is awesome. I'm especially impressed by how well you're evoking Dresden - he sounds right on the bat. I can't wait to see what heppens next!
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