Aww men why reveal lulu is alive.. Im thinking its too early.. Or why tell the school where they are hiding... Dummy dumb dumb Clovis..

Amazing story, you can still pick this up and update, it's only been 8 years ...

Awesome story!

Hahaha the knights remind me of power rangers and their colours

Dammit. Why did you have to kill the new nicer clovis

Now that's a stupid mao. Did you put him there just for Rai to appear?

really enjoyed this first chapter... hope you finish this fic

This is truly very interesting to read; I hope this gets updated

This is truly very interesting to read; please update soon

the time skips are a little disorienting this chapter but overall it was good.
I don't like how Lelouch gives his name so easily, it seems like a mistake

Finally someone recognizes Suzaku's hypocrisy and naivety. I have never liked him.
Loved the chess match scene

So refreshing to see a fic slowly move away from canon
P.S. Damn the cliff :P

What an awesome first chapter! Usually first chapters are bad and I have to grind trough them, but not this fic. Cant wait to see what comes next.

"Win?" Karen asked, as if the very concept was something unbelievable.

You need to change that section. Your Lelouch said something about protecting the Japanese, not winning against Britannia. What Kallen's saying makes no sense in that situation.

Interesting, but in a Brittanian classroom, they would be referring to the Japanese as Elevens.