The fight was surprisingly intense and a definite contrst to the sweet friendship fluff that occured in the last two shots. I liked I though. Falco sure did pull some moves that threw me off guard for a moment. After the fight was my favorite part however. Falco was so awkward after Yoshi bypassed him. Can you say ka-yoot? Yay for the random insertion of Princess Peach. She provided a neutral third opnion/statement towards Falco's place amongst the Brawlers. HOORAY.

Aw, that is such a picturesque moment.

This is an odd pair. I don't think I've ever seen a Falco Yoshi centric fic. Friggin' sweet.

Aww, you're not going to write about Yoshi's match? WTF! It would be really sweet to see Falco trying to be happy about a win for Yoshi and then watch him kinda feel sorry for himself, but then, like, Yoshi could cheer him up, ya know? I mean, if you REALLY hate writing fighting scenes, it's okay if you don't wanna make a chapter for it, but it might give the story a little more spice. It's just a suggestion, you may take it or leave it. Oh, BTW, excellent chapter. The only thing that bugged me was the repeat intro thingy about Mario. Your battle scene was completely fine and I rather enjoyed reading it. I apologize in advance if anything I've said has offended or displeased you in any way. Have a lovely day.

I like how that ended, very cute. Yep! Hey, you should read the fic I'm working on, Captured!, I'm almost done.

I think I'm somewhat psychic. I dream certain things, and then they come true the following day. The last paragraph I dreamt seeing! Those exact words! Call me crazy if you want, but...

There's no denying something like that!

Shadow-Rukario-chan34276

Yet again, you never cease to amaze me with your work. I truely love the concepts behind your stories and I like how well you are able to write fight scenes. You've definately got a fan in me. Have a lovely day.

Aww, that was so cute! I really like this story, as its really cute and, and the pairing is quite original. Though, are the chapters continuums, or oneshots moulded into a story? Anyway, really nice! See ya!

Shadow-Rukario-chan34276

Aw, how cute! So fluffy! Kudos to friendshippy ficcies! Unique pairing. And a well made story, too. Maybe I should write another story of this type... One that involves a bet. Spoilers of an upcoming fic! I update quick, so please check soon, and keep up the awesome work, Papersak-chan! Ja ne!

That was really good and different to read for a change. Thank you for being the kind of writer who's willing to think outside the box. I love your work and I hope you continue to write more fics like this. Have a lovely day.

Oh hai, Papersak! :D

Hehe, this fic was so cute. XP Made me smile, murhur. I noticed a technical error or two, but nothing too bad. Nice work! :D

Heh, I think the "friendship" genre is becoming one of my favorites. XP

It seems Yoshi has a knack for bringing smiles to the faces of those reading his story, as well as those within it, . "Satisfaction" is a perfectly lovely fic, most satisfying (and true to its name indeed) - I was smiling by its conclusion. I loved the line "Yoshi didn't mind whether or not Falco remembered this day, so long as it ended a little happier than it started for him" - it's such a simple, elegant line with which to wrap up the tale.

Falco and Yoshi's battle felt disconnected from the setting; I was hoping to see how their surroundings would effect the skirmish (balancing on that thin layer of snow, breathing the frigid air - considering neither Falco nor Yoshi care for either of these things, it would have been interesting to see how they handled these details). But other than that, I quite enjoyed this story.

Here's to another Smash fic leaping forth from your imagination and into life!