YES, SUSAN DESERVED TO RETURN TO NARNIA, DAMMIT! *still salty over The Last Battle* Beautiful fic, full of feels for my OTP :') Well done!

Amazing!

Awesome! ;]

loved the song too, but I keep getting my heart squeezed out when I do listen to it because I know that from that point onwards, the Pevensies would never travel back to Narnia with the four of them together.

Heart-wrenching! Good job. I too love The Call (song). It was rather sad, though: Susan leaving all of England behind. I suppose it makes sense, from a certain point of view...at any rate, I invite you to read my story, 'The Proper Surprise Ending'. It's probably not as well-written as yours, but I'd like you to see which ending of 'Prince Caspian' you liked better. As I said before, great job!

I cried so hard! ;)()()()

I love it! It was a really good and sad story but a little confusning.

i love it!

thanks for making this for
us who really loved CASPIAN AND SUSAN :))

This story is absolutely beautiful! Great job!

Hey, thanks for writing that. You read something like this and wonder, why not? Good job!

I loved it so so so so very much!

aww im ggonna cry and i dont really kno why its happy but im still tearing up!WHY?oh well that was a really good story i just watched caspian for the like 6 or 7th time and i was like u kno that really sucks that they cant be together i need to have an alternate ending but i usually do for movie so i come here...thats all BYE!

As far as Suspian fics go, this one is better than most. You spell, describe, and use grammar well. Also, it isn't as outlandish as most. One thing, though, - Susan returning and marrying Caspian would not have had a small effect on Narnian history. The Silver Chair would never have happened at all. I believe I will not touch on all the numerous blasphemies the whole Suspian realm brings up, for if I did you would be in for a long, tiresome read.

The main reason I read and reviewed this story (being a staunch adversary to Suspian) is your author's note. C.S. Lewis has been unjustly, in my opinion, accused of being sexist be so many people. A child wrote him a letter lamenting Susan's fate and he replied that her story was not over. Susan did not lose Narnia because of nylons, lipstick, and parties. She chose to forget Narnia, and the only reason she did not return to Narnia in The Last Battle is that she did not die in the train wreck. Remember, "Once a King or Queen of Narnia, always a King or Queen." I am sure she returned to Narnia when she died.

God bless,

Lady of Stormness Mountain

That was cute.

I don't think I reviewed already but if I did you'e getting extra credit i suppose.

I loved it. But at the moment this is all I can think of to write