The language you used here is so vivid; I could practically feel the rain on my skin.

I am. Flabbergasted. I did not know such a wonderful, wonderful Inuyasha/Sango story existed, and I am even more in shock (with lovely, lovely surprise) that it was inspired by me! This is definitely better then anything I ever posted for this pairing.

You have real line-gems in here. Sango building her house around him. Him resenting her for sleeping. Waiting for the storm to break. I can't sleep without you. ...And so many others. All those lines were thorns on roses. Powerful, shocking, and sad.

I also think you really characterized Inuyasha well. He is selfish, even when he it pains him to be, because he doesn't know any other way. He tries to help people by hurting them. He is not perfect, but he is redeemable. It's him.

Thank you for creating such a beautiful piece. It certainly does justice to the potential of the pairing. I am only sorry that I didn't see this sooner.

Awh :D That was breathtaking. I love your writing style, you kept me thinking.

I love this. Hugely. It's so... raw... pure feeling in an almost poetic format.

very well done! almost like a poem, but i love it just the same.

Wow this was very nice. What a great read. I really enjoyed it, good job.

wow that was very very cute! I liked it a lot!

Think u could read my fanfiction? An Epic Romance? Its a Sango love story. hope you R&R Thanks! :)

Oh i love it! I haven't come across a new inuxsan in forever! i'm neglecting my tea because of this (it's on a table far away from the laptop) because i'm going to read it again, yay!

OMG Perfect Ending!

xD

It was kinda sad in the middle, but to me,

the ending was absolutely perfect

I liked it when they had that little conversation:

{The women I love are cursed,” and means it. Then he stretches his thought, full of significance, to finger her hair and enter her head.

And her eyes, dark as liquid tea-stains, wander around him, moths to a flame, flicker, and settle. She says, “Then stop cursing them.”}

Awesome story

Wow... this is so gorgeously written and so painfully in character. I love the writing style, too and the underlying approaching storm. Such a powerful piece in so little words... just amazing. Thank you for sharing.