Yikes! Sorry, I know that's not very constructive but that's my reaction. Yikes!

Well, that was just horribly angsty... well done! :)

I really liked this. Very sad.

Perfectly in character for Gwen and Owen as well. Wll done!

Well done. Your stories have an intense realism to them in the way that you use details like the braces left on the bed, and your awareness of both the charaters and of human emotion in general is brilliant. You ought to get published properly, I mean that.

That was fantastic. You had me wondering if he would or not right up until the end.

This made me sad. But I like it though. Sometimes its good to feel sad.