Whoa, very stirring... excellently written, I feel that it perfectly portrays the relationships between Jessie, James, and Jessiebelle.

Beutiful I only wish that you wrote his parents, and Jessibelle reaction to his death.

This gave me the chills, nearly made me cry, and had me smiling... in other words, it's fantastic and I love it!

Jessibelle : Great story though :L

Waah. Only someone who loves him can be so cruel to him in a fic. Kudos. You made me cry! Enjoyed the read very much, however!

Awesome story but it freaked me out.

Wow, totally AWSOME! *_*

I'll never see James as the same person ever again.

I've found nothing I could criticise, so I hope to read something like this again soon D

wow. so emotional. i can totally see this happening (sadly)... good job tho! i luv how the story is like a thought process.

Still as Amazing as ever I see. I love your Fan fics and they get better and it up! :)

This is brilliant. I love this, you have a real talent for writing. Well done.

...damn...

AH NO!

Poor Growlie, I could just imagine the poor thing killed on the floor...OH MAN, THE IMAGERY! And poor Meowth, Jessie and James too.

But the way you described Growly...AH NO! I was also listening to Academic Festival Overture while reading this...it actually kinda matched up. Creepy. O.o

-pukes-

Heh, well, you warned me. I have no one to blame but myself. XD As you know, depressing stuff really takes a toll on me, but overall I think the idea for this was truly good. But I still can't regret that I'm waiting for the next chapter of AFG. So do it, and make it SNAPPEH! Just kiddinz. :P

XD

What a lovely deep and dark story. I understand James choice to commit suicide, when you have nothing left but pain why bother living? With the fact that Jessie and Meowth died, I like the ending, so they can be together. It is bittersweet, but at least their together. Great imaginary, and good conveyance of James' depression and desperation. The description of Jessie and Meowth is very tragic and heartbreaking. I really enjoyed reading this, it is beautifully written. Keep up the fantastic work.