This is excellent.

THIS IS SO ADORABLE. OH MY GOSH. MY HEART. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME?

I have to say that was beautiful, I loved it! Ferb is a fun but very complicated character to write and write correctly and I have to say you nailed him!

Awww!

Your story just makes me wish that there were more brotherly moments in the show itself. If only something equal to this happened in the show...it would've been amazing. You are certainly one of the better writers out there; someone who I will never be. But maybe I can hope, for the only thing impossible is impossibility itself.

This is so sweet! I wish they would show more brotherly love in the cartoon. They show friendship and boyish bromance, and some sister-brotherness, but I haven't really seen much brotherly love between these two. You did a really good job! Plus, you followed the episode meme with Ferb's one-liner at the end. )

An excellent take on the beginnings of the boys' relationship delivered in your technically accurate and engaging writing style. Favorited.

that's really sweet! I liked this one!

Just...brilliant. )

Well, you don't see many stories about Ferb and Phineas meeting (usually it's Phineas and Isabella) but this one was amazingly well written, especially the imagery. Keep it up!

Well, you don't see many stories about Ferb and Phineas meeting (usually it's Phineas and Isabella) but this one was amazingly well written, especially the imagery. Keep it up!

Genius dude pure genius!

very very cute and well written

this is soo beautiful i had never thought about phineas and ferb's relationship like this it was simply beautiful!

This is simply brilliant! Your grasp of grammar and word choice is some of the best I've ever seen, and when combined with the way you nailed Ferb's character, this becomes one of the most amazing one shots I've ever read.