Dude I'd read it but...the front of your format seems messed up. I see dozens of scribbles on the letters here and there. Mainly on the qoutes.

It's a shame you're not updating anymore. I'd love to read more, this is pretty good.

Oh yea! Xd Plot is a very good thing and I wanna see where this one goes ! XD Please update!

This is a very good story. It's my first time reading a story that involves other characters like Tio. He is one tough chocobo rider. I had a hard time trying to beat him in the chocobo races in the game. Anyway, keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of this story.

I'm really liking this so far. Keep it up. Yay for Tifa X Yuffie! you gonna have run-ins with the others? Barret? Vinni? Cid?

Write some more! This story is amazingly cool!

Good story, although I disagree with the bad reputation you gave Cloud with regards to Tifa. I don't think Cloud was ever that obsessed with Aeris. You made him seem like a bum for goodness sake! You're going to have him come back to sweep Tifa away right? PLEASE?

Could you e-mail me with your plot?

This history is quite good!

Please continue it!

An interesting story, its drawn my attention to it each time it updated, and now I finally reviewed it. Excellent work, it takes a very unique path and the use of the minor characters from the game is refreshing. As to the name mixup? Don't bother with it, I don't think many people will care too greatly. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

It was? Oops... maybe no one will notice?

Hate to be the nit-picker to tell you this but the chocobo's name was Tio, the jockey's name was Joe.

At last, another chapter. The plot thickens. I like where this is headed. I only wish the chapter was a little longer, but what you have here is very good.

Oooh! Finish! Please? :( This is very good, and I'd love to see more.

Excellent! Please, write more! )

DarkPaladin, I updated the earlier chapters of the story with a few revisions.