That was really cool.

all I can really say is WOW...You have a really great way of writing stories ( well at least this story, haven't read any others yet). Normally I am more of a sam/jack shipper, but I have to say that I really enjoyed reading this story. I will definately start reading your other stories, cause if they are writtin in the same way as this one was I will definately enjoy them to.

I never used to be a Daniel/Sam fan... always thinking that it should be Jack and Sam. But after reading a few fics and then running across this one... I'm so in love with Daniel and Sam!

This was beautifully written, almost musically with your wording in the first chapter. I was thrown by it. Lovely reading.

Thank you so much!
Treva Rea

great story. loved it

AMAZING a real pick me up for a bad day WOW!

That was amazingly detailed and the dialouge was pitch perfect for the characters. Pacing was excellent.

I usually don't like first persons and I normally read oneshots, but I really enjoyed this story. It didn't drag on, it had a really good amount of detail and I really liked the language. It was sensual without being vulger and I really appreciate that in a story.

Great story! Well done.

So this the difference between descriptions of making love and regular smut. You captured the action, the emotion, with your technique of a succession of short paragraphs very well.

Best line:

“Do you think that for one night…just one night…you could tell that infuriating voice in your head to go to hell.”

Best lines (reminding us of why Daniel is the best negotiator in SGC):

“Screw the regulations!”

“I’ll see you on Monday.”

Beautiful! Thank you!

Ahh... so romantic! I read anothert storu recently that had a similar plot but I have to admit I like this one way beeter!

I JUST WANTED TO LET YOU KNOW THAT I LOVED YOUR STORY. IT WAS A GREAT STORY AND VERY WELL WRITTEN.

I loved this story. I'm usually a sam/jack shipper but I think this may have tured me.