Oh man i was rereading this because of was so good the first time and nostalgia hit me like a brick. You are a brilliant story writer and i love this ship so much. Tout did such a good job characterizing Rose!

love it

Though I like your Rose series very much but I don't appreciate Sirius being a rapist who only thinks of Rose's father

"She belonged to nobody, so, in a way, she belonged to everybody" is a hauntingly accurate line.

Would be there a sequel to original? Or the story does not need any continuation and you just let reader what happened in the end?

Well, it certainly explains some things from original story and style is improved much more (not that it was bad before), but I must admit that there are things uncovered and more complicated to be explained. Just like why Road thought in original story that Snape hated both of her parents when she knew for a fact that he was friends with her mother?

Amazing

And here I wanted to start demanding that you cannot let this be all! But there is more! yay :D

Wow! Your Rose series is one of the best Sev/Harry fic out there. You really captured Severus and Harry's attitude in your stories. It's both believable and fun to read. Would have nice to see Severus and harry living together and happy in the girl in the war. But I have a feeling that, that story would not be having a happily ever after. :)

Oh hell...did not see that coming...this made me cry...thank you...

WOW

Excellent

Oh heaven. I haven't cried so hard in so long.
I got here from reading "Girl in War" by astridfire, and read your "Girl in War".
I don't have any comments except that I had to leave you a review because your story, honest to heaven, deserves it.

-Sevenisthemagicnumber

I love how Snape expresses his obsession and devotion through cruelty and a harsh, tentative sort of kindness. It really showcases the complexity of his character, and even how he realizes his relationship with her is bizarre. (Don't get me wrong; I love the concept of their relationship - *because* it's bizarre.) The bit where she accused him of hurting her via Sirius and his look of surprise was pitch-perfect. Ahh, love this.

One of the better written "fem-harry" fanfics available. I heartily enjoyed the complexities and perfectly captured idiosyncrasies of Snape. I also enjoy the very strange ambiguity of Snape and Rose's relationship. Great way to end a fantastic one-shot. I know you haven't written in a while, but I think you should re-consider; this universe needs more fleshing out (for us!)

Thanks again for a great, quick read!