| Reviews for Shine |
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  Guest chapter 4 . 2/9/2013 nice story : |
 rainbowlollipops15 chapter 4 . 7/26/2012 very impressed by the high standard of your work, i loved it! |
| kenz chapter 4 . 2/2/2012 loved it! A unique perspective. Aly would have known, wouldn't she? great job, congrats! |
| AGirlAlone chapter 1 . 10/1/2011 awww, she's so SWEET! I just wanna hug her! |
| Obsessivebookworm14 chapter 4 . 12/15/2010 Aw, Aw, Aw. Those three (one) words describe this story perfectly: I loved it! always knew Aly was observent. |
| Yuki chapter 2 . 9/7/2010 I LOVE IT |
| Bloodhaund chapter 1 . 9/7/2010 Wow that's a smart kid! |
| Aisie chapter 4 . 8/6/2010 LOVE this... and it was really well written! |
| DreamingIce chapter 4 . 10/3/2009 This is a beautiful set of oneshots, for many reasons. 1- Children's perspectives are so fun to both read AND write (for me at least) and give such oppertunities for that oh so perceptive nature. 2- this is beautifully written. The flow of the story is great, and the characters are very real and in character. I can just see Aly and Alan terrorising people at the Swoop! 3- Young Swoop children. How awesome to see them written so well! I Don't think there are enough stories on them when they are this young. It always seems to be more Rebel!Aly only. Which makes me sad. I can see her being an observant trouble maker, along with her twin, as a little kid, and that comes out here in a wonderful manner! Nice Work! |
| L.A.H.H chapter 4 . 8/6/2009 I loved this. Thanks for writing it. x |
| fantasy77 chapter 4 . 7/19/2009 Aww that was soo cute! I loved it being told from Aly's pov, so innocent and sweet but also with her humour and cunning. My fave bit was when she yelled, I told you so! ah that was soo good! Well written and loved it all! Thanks again, Fantasy |
| TheWackedOne chapter 4 . 7/2/2009 cute |
| LunaSphere chapter 1 . 6/22/2009 lovely. |
| BlueSkiesFanatic chapter 4 . 4/30/2009 WRONG!WRONG!WRWRONG!WRONG! WHY, in the previous chapters, did you say that Aly was 4, and now you're saying that alan is 7! oh, now i get it . years have passed. YOU COULD 'VE MENTIONED IT! BURNT APPLESAUCE! *To the cunfused author, 'BURNT APPLESAUCE!' is my new way of saying " Wow. Superb. Amazing. Great job. Keep writing. " AND "Toodles! " All at once. Share the love. Share the applesauce. |
| tuxie13 chapter 4 . 4/3/2009 no u can't b done! plz start a new tp story plzplzplz! i need some good tp stories 2 read! |
