I really likes the beginning of the story, the rest not so much... Not that it's badly written, but such complicatied romances aren't really my thing , i'm more a straight forward kind of girl 'start with hating eachother, become friends, fall in love' with no twists of relapses into hating... But for people who are into that kind of thing, i think your story is great !

sadly i'll have to stop reading the story now. i'm just not feeling it any longer. there were to many cuts in the storyline for my linking and i don't feel like it is realistic any longer. i don't see Tom letting that happen again, as he should be 17 by now and could therefore use magic. also i don't like the plotline with old ginny Training Tom to be voldemort. so sadly i'm out.

An overall good chapter but there were a few inconsistencies. For starters, they did not learn the Patronus charm in Hogwarts as it was too difficult. Second of all, Riddle seems slightly OOC. He had a "friend" group called the Knights of Walpurgis, later to be known as Death Eaters. He should be more manipulative and less "weak", if you catch my drift. Anyways, this was a good first chapter but I really had hoped you elaborate on Ginny before she time-traveled!

A harsh instense story that I didn't want to finish but couldn't stop reading.

OMG I love how you wrote that note to...whoever it was to, and signed it: Yours sincerely, Illiterate Twat.
That note had just the right mixture of proffessionalism, control, and sass.
Oh yeah...I also loved the story, though it did get a little confusing near the end (but I still loved it).

I love this story so much so far. I have such a weakness for a Ginny/Tom pairing no matter how dark it gets. And I know it's written a bit ago I know the answer to the Russia question. Its both Europe and Asia. Its split in half as such because it's so large. I forget where exactly it's split though.

Protip: ' is not a quotation mark. " Is a quotation mark.

Excellent! I have never read a Tom story before and never expected to LIKE him!
I usually only read Hermione stories to be honest but I like Ginny so when I found this one I though hey why not give something new a chance. SO glad I did. This story was brilliant! Congratulations on a story WELL told and thank you for sharing a piece of your wonderful imagination. I am blown away.

Hi, this is my first TR/GW story I have read. I like the idea and your writing is good. The one thing I have a problem with is the names of your OC's. You have quite a lot of OC's but there are quite a few missing characters which should be in Hogwarts and Slytherin at the time Tom riddle is there; for example Malfoy and Lestrange.

Wasn't too fond of Ginny's Second name either, seems much too Muggle or me but I guess it must be difficult to write a witchs' name ahah!

Your grammar and spelling are quite good and I do look forward to reading the rest of the story!

:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) i finished it. i finally finished it. i found your story a year back it caught my eye because it's a ginny x tom, which is unusual to me, and it involved a dead harry and a time turner. to which i thought, cooooool plot, must be an interesting story. i said that a year ago. whenever i open this bookmark i was always not in the mood to read. been rereading the first four chapters over the year to see it if would make me wanna read it in its entirety. and finally it did! tonight! which i am so happy about you have no idea because it was such a piece. a really really reaaaally good piece. and i thank you for sharing this piece of your world to us. :DDDDDDDDD really! i like your plot twists and the depth you give your characters which examples what drives them. i loved tom and riddle and ginny and ricky and keara. basically i love your characters. they're alive not just a means to make a plot move. :)
but it'd be nice to see the world outside tom and ginny. to see what's happening out there. like say, i would love to see ginny and hagrid meeting, of the complexities and comforts of being in slytherin, the chaos the took place when theodor was petrified, eileen and mr. snape, the likes.. although if it's too much to write and really doesn't go with your plot, i completely understand. :)
it was perfect. :) i would love to beta for you! hihi. :) to help you reduce the unnecessary dealings with the dude/dudette of the illiterate-twat thing. or maybe you could just get a legit beta. i just want to beta for you because your work wasamazing. i want to see more amazing things.
THANK YOU AGAIN! I will now sleep and read welcome heroes.

*also. i am, i confess, quite confuse with the last chapters. are they all what-ifs that took place in tom's head?

You probably don't care and already had it answered for you or don't even read comments anymore because you slipped from fanfic world, but technically Russians are considered Europeans. While most of Russia is in Asia, the vast majority of the population lives in Europe. Also, tele does not mean mind but rather "far".

Hi!

I don't know you, but I still hope that you are completely okay. Now I will be moving onto the actual point of this review (of which I shall acknowledge is a miracle, because I am a sadistic human being, and I hardly review anything, let alone fan fiction that has already being complete).

Firstly, I will fangirl: "OH MY BLOODY TOM! IT WAS ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC!". Now I will move to the better, less frightening way to put my fancifully into some understandable and less senseless way. The plot you came up with, as twisted and complicated as it was, was exquisitely written. I tend to ship people snuck out of a journal of impossible things, so I find myself often reading Ginevra/Riddle and trying not be disappointed how infuriatingly obvious most of them tend to be. Either too out of character without a satisfying reason as to why a character acts certain way, or to cannon, merely sticking to what our dear JK has already written. But I am glad and pleasured to announce that your plot is simply fantastic, as my Doctor would have put it.

You did a rather fantastic sewing of this piece of unknown beauty. I did not only enjoyed it, but understood it completely, for what I am completely grateful for. You choose an intersting story line, and time travel isn't exactly the easiest topic to make a story about, you need to calculate years, days and even hours sometimes, also, come up with how the hell whatever you choose to introduce the character into time traveling device actually has some believable-enough root, and because the characters reactions need to be calculated as TMR calculated how he was going to use the horrocruxes, what he wanted them to be, how to actually find those things, and the perfect hiding place. Characters reactions need to be linked to character's personalities and the changes they go throught the story, and it is what had me so hanged on your piece of literature.

Ginny was completely Ginny. Tom was completely Tom (leaving out the fact that thanks to the Amortentia that Merope gave Tom's pathetic excuse of a sperm donor was the main reason of the «I Am Lord Voldermort» fiasco in the first place, since he was forsaken of any sort of empathy or emotions related to affection or love (don't get me wrong, it's not a critic, it worked wonderfully without that piece of information and it's fanfiction anyway)).

I just simply loved it. Every bit of it. :D

Secondly, I red the sequel and was in utter dismay for it only had a prologue and one chapter. I don't blame you though, but I would massively love you more, stranger, if you could continue it. It's obviously a foolish and wistful request of a really humble reader that would like to know how this magnificent plot ends, to bring to a close the story that she devoured in little more than twelve hours. It had me completely hooked, and the tiny slash of a rose's thorn picked at my finger when I just don't know how it ends.

If not continued fully, will you please, maybe, just maybe, write a one-shot that covers as much of what you intended to do. I would love for it to be finished and close ther chapter so that my wandering mind will stop making stuff up that are probably or probably not what it is meant to become. If not, it is okay, but at least I tried. Just feel the third Tom's murdering rage and try to cope with it when he unleashes his bottled up emotions on you, it won't be pretty.

Thanks for getting down to my humble review's ended, I hope you're having a fantastic life and that I may have woke a spark so that you can creat the floor to the endless pitch black hole that you created during those five years of silence, rather untyping.?

Sincerely,
A girl who wants to finish speculating about the end of your awesome story yet still loved the first part as much as Snape's memories

PS: *fan girling* OMBT! IT WAS FANTASTIC! Allons-y! Write some more pretty please with a chocolate covered Tom Riddle on top! *bats eyelashes sweetly*

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This story was a little too discombobulated for me. I'm not sure where you intended this to go, but for me it really lost itself after ch 5. It really wasn't consistent and so its characters lost their humanity and believability, in my opinion. Good start though, maybe you might think about editing it later on.

What just happened? What is life? Wait... what?

Ch. 4- okay, what just happened? One second Tom is vulnerable and loving... and then suddenly a heartless mad man? What? How did he find out Ginny was from the future? Why does he not like her anymore? I'm confused and have a minor case if whiplash, I can't wait to see how this unfolds and I really want back the Tom from Easter break!