story is absolutely diferent. i have always like adventure tagged story. this is my first time to read this fanfic. so far, it keep me captivated.i hope i'm be able to finish it until the last chapter.. so far i have read to chapter 3

Honestly, everyone can be rusty sometimes :) Thats make us more human. As to your writing, its beautiful. And definitely, you should write another chap to put a closure. If you intend it to be as tragic as romeo and juliet, then, so be it. I just do believe that every journey deserves an ending. No matter how beautiful a plot is, if it is unfinished, then it will always remain a beautiful draft :) Make it a story my dear. Mikan is an enthusiastic girl and whether, she will be with Natsume or not, hope to read her being a twit again. And..hope Natsume is alive

Update this awesome story or else...

And you sparkie... you need to do justice to this fic and tie the loose ends properly. After all the trouble i did defending this adorable work (although i know you're very capable). You can make try to appease me with some rukaru. *readies my higher caliber gun in case you try to shoot me*

For starters, this is a good read. This came from a really picky reader like myself. And to that flamer that said this bore her, i'm not asking you to leave. This is how you critique. I've been on this fandom ever since and I have probably read almost any well-written GA fic and I can say this was one of the best AU fic out there. The world building probably needed more work, but the characters felt canon. They even have depth. They were given proper background that served as the foundation of their personalities, how would they respond to situations,heck even their dialogue. It was splendid if you ask me. They grew on me. About the flow and pace, i think it was set right. You can't expect them to fall for each other after the first few nights. They worked on their differences. I like that. And who can hate this author's witty comments? The way she writes is vivid minus the flowery words that other writers insert that disrupt the reader's flow. Although i understand it's important to set the mood, draw the picture.

is it the end? if it is then all the hard work went down the drain. i am a sucker for happy endings.. and this stroy was last updated in 2008 so i don't think there will be an update. so, we have to rely on our imagination to complete this uncompleted story anyway it was good and nicely written
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Will this be continued?

I hope the next chapter is coming up soon
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! TTTT TTTT TTTT

EEEEEEE! _ OMG SOOOOO KAWAII MIKAN IS SOO DENSE! EEEE!

OMG EEEEEE! XD XD XD XD

WHY DON'T THEY GET IT DOWN ALREADY! I'M GETTING TIRED OF ALL THOSE CAT AND MOUSE FIGHTS AND ALL THOSE SEXUAL TENSION IN THE AIR.

It s not the end right ? RIGHT ?! COME ON YOU CAN T LEAVE LIKE THIS ! DON T ABANDON MEEEEE :'( ... Juuuust kidding but i hope it s not the end :D hope to see ya soon :)

;A; Such a beautiful story owo)b
Love it! I never liked tragedies though, this is a first!

Not rusty at all ! I'm sad. Because of a fictional plot and character that you brought to life with writing, so be happy