Wow, amazing story. I had thought that o read all the good stories, until I found this one. Just excellent, one of the very best!

I love all of your works.. Simply amazing. I love all the other TSOM fanfics here but I have to say yours are truely my favorites. So sad you haven't written anything for a long time.

AMAZING writing - Maria falling out of the tree and onto Capt vT after the children playing a prank on her is just GREAT. It is interesting you include how he gets involved with Elsa and how she had a thing for him when he fell for Agathe. Capt vT bumping into Maria at the Abbey is a good idea and then him overhearing the nun's conversation about how she is the 'Black Sheep of Nonnberg'. I love how you include Max's thoughts as well as the conversation with Elsa when Capt vT and Maria are arguing beside the lake. Then the bit where Capt vT asks Maria to stay is BRILLIANTLY done. You are a fantastic story teller - LOVE this.

Very nice.

the magic flute is singspiel, not an opera.

Love the story though

This was a beautiful story that I devoured till the very end!

I LOVE ur writing!

please finish this story..i like it a lot

It's taken me a great deal of debate to decide which story to review, since I read them all completely out of order and a bit haphazardly, until they've all sort of melded into one in such a way that I can't quite work out where one finshed and the next begins. Which is really how it should be, because they are all parts of the same story.

Anyway. After that deep insight into my physci, we shall move on.

Love it. All of it. I love the way you write your charecters, the way you flesh them out and explore their darker sides, the way everything you write is so completely and utterly plausable and believeable, to the point where I'm sure the absence of a Pirate Pair the next time I watch the film will disappoint me greatly.

So I look forward greatly to your next work, especially the other two Folk Dances - you've explored mainly pre-Something Good interaction, and I can't wait to see what you do with the aftermath. I don't suppose I can put in a special request for a telling-the-children scene? I've read so many SoM stories over the past few days, a lot of them have all merged in together, but I'm fairly certain you've not done one, and I do like them.

Anyway. I'm going to stop babbleing now. I'm fairly sleep-deprived at the moment, I'm not normally this incoherent, I promise. My next review will make far more sense.

Keep writing! Soon! PLEASE!

Emma

This was a wonderfully written story. We got to see into both the Captain and Maria's thoughts and it didn't stray from the movie. I hope you write more Sound of Music fanfiction.

Wonderful job on this story. I love how you are able to take the movie and flesh it out so much without getting away from the plot or the characters. It really is amazing!

I enjoyed your story very much and I liked how you expanded upon the scene where the Captain asks Maria to stay. Having Max there to view some of the interaction between them, even if only for a little while, was interesting. I think Max gets quite a bit of enjoyment out of seeing his friend dealing with the governess. I'm excited to see what story you'll write next, even if you do need a little time after posting this one.

This story is an incredible achievement, so very, very well done! Smile!

Shahrazad63, I just want to say that I love this story... actually, I love all your stories. I love your Maria, Georg and most of all your Max (I am always laughing at the things he says!).

Thank you for sharing this story and I hope you continue to write more wonderful SOM fiction.

P.S. I love your little quotes at the beginning of each chapter.

Aw, this was the most beautiful update- you get both POVs so well, its amazing and the small changes in the story line do fit in so well- please keep updating, I cant wait for more!

I loved how you showed what Max and the Baroness were doing during most of the fight. I especially liked Max's reaction. Very good, and I appreciate the quick updates and long chapters.