Very descriptive writing style- good stuff!

Nice little piece. Silverbolt needs more stories like this.

Hee, electro-kink! Badass. At least Silverbolt found a way to enjoy the storm after all... of course, he'll catch hell for it, but still.

This is really nice! It's good to see Silverbolt as something other than the Aerialbot's resident killjoy/babysitter. And this is done so well!