Reviews for Slip
RosaCaninaAishiteru chapter 7 . 4/26/2009
Hahaha! Great fic loved it!
Hell's Angelfire-08 chapter 7 . 6/30/2008
Oh jeah, now that's an ending. Very cute. And I really enjoyed that small hint of naughty goodness at the end. Thin walls do suck ass. Unless you're the one abusing them. Go Lindsay and Cindy.
Finalhybrid chapter 7 . 6/27/2008
Yay for Curious Jill indeed, she's always fun to read.

I'd say poor George but I'd deal with the lack of sleep to be on the other side of the wall of Lindsay and Cindy, hehe.

Thanks for giving a nice epilogue for this story and hope to read more stories from you soon.
The Oh So Bored One chapter 7 . 6/26/2008
The last part. O.O The first part. :D

Haha! I suppose they did the dirty the night before xD
michelle chapter 6 . 6/26/2008
These are great please write some more.
The Oh So Bored One chapter 6 . 6/25/2008
I took the bribe. :D

It didn't seem rushed o.O Then again, the whole thing covered a span of less then 5 minutes... I liked it :D

Though, the caramel-tasting-Lindsay part sorta /did/ feel rushed. There was (I think) nothing about caramel, or what Linsay's lips tasted like in the previous chapters and here you are ending with the fact that Linday Boxer tastes like caramel.

Nuh-uh.
MooseWasHere chapter 6 . 6/25/2008
That was great! I really, really want an epilogue...please!
Libmix chapter 6 . 6/25/2008
I've just read the whole thing through again and have to agree with others, an epilogue would wrap things up nicely :D I love the last line of this chapter, made me grin! Thanks for sharing the Lindsay/Cindy goodness xx
Hell's Angelfire-08 chapter 6 . 6/25/2008
Okay, first, not a final chapter. Because that ending is way to good to just leave it at that. So, yeah, an epilogue would be sweet. Second, this has been such a great little series and I've enjoyed every chapter you've posted. I hope you write more stories in future. And I so hope you post that epilogue. You do Lindsay and Cindy very well and make them quite authentic. So, here's hoping there's an epilogue to come. Have a good one.
Finalhybrid chapter 6 . 6/25/2008
Bribe or not, I love this story and would write a comment anyway, if that gets an epilogue posted, that's even better. Poor Cindy breaking her own heart before Lindsay can tell her the truth. Glad she finally told her, too bad they never showed something like this in the show.
Cora Summers chapter 6 . 6/24/2008
That was really good. I had to go back and remind myself what had happened before, but it all flowed nicely. But I would still like to see an epilogue.
Hell's Angelfire-08 chapter 5 . 6/17/2008
Geez, their nervousness was palpable in this chapter but it made it so much more enjoyable. Thumbs up for an excellent addition to this cute little story, and I so can't wait for the next part. Totally loved Lindsay knowing she likes Cindy but not knowing what she's going to do about it. Looking forward to more... soon hopefully.
Finalhybrid chapter 5 . 6/16/2008
I'm really glad to see this story wasn't forgotten about. Personally, I'd say any update is a good update. Can't wait to read more.
Finalhybrid chapter 4 . 5/26/2008
Love Cindy's babbling and you nailed it perfectly. I feel kinda bad for her, preparing herself for a broken heart like that. Please post more soon.
Hell's Angelfire-08 chapter 4 . 5/26/2008
Nice little addition to a finel, growing story. I'm definitely excited for more. You got Cindy's cuteness nailed hands down. And Lindsay being the aggressor in searching her out is too cool. Can't wait for their convo in Cindy's apartment. Looking forward to more so update soon please.
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