This is great!

Aww - I love this story - I thought that characterisations of Kurosaki and Ishida were spot on. Awesome story line.

Nela

Haha this is hilarious! Plz update soon!

my only critique on chapter 1 is that Ryuuken used to have black hair. we see this in flashbacks that Uryuu has. Ryuuken used to have black hair and look like a manlier version of Uryuu.

Otherwise I'm interested to read more *goes to do just that*

OMAKE

ICHIGO: You bet on me hating my name and trying to kill you?

ISSHIN: Well I lost 1,000 yen.

URYU:(WALKING BY) Wow Kurosaki guess what? My dad just gave me a thousand yen to kill today.

ICHIGO: That is dirty money your dad won from a bet because he knew about the relationship we'd have.

I LOVED IT! Please Continue!

Hahahahaha! I loved that blackmail part! Gosh I always thought we needed more Isshin Ryuuken friendship fics out there! I really like exclaimation marks!

LUV IT! HOPE U UPDATE SON

I can't wait for the 5th chapter! C'mon, this is awesome. Please write more. Ha, Ryuukan fails at dating. Everyone knows what to do at a time like that. No wonder Uryu doesn't have a woman, look at his father. Great chapter, update soon please.

This was nothing short of amazingly funny! Ishida got drunk off his rocker, litterally! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Keep it up, this is priceless!

Great, simply awesome! Those two are soo alike, apart from their perceptions of the dead. And that mkes it even better. Please don't stop writing this!

Haha! This was priceless. Good idea, the two do own hospitals to some degree, so why not? Looking forward to reading more! They act so much like their sons.

Thnx for updating~ LOVE it! Kirei is so super sweet! (though ko-chan scares me, he's a boy bunny,cat-thing right? Ishida should be so jealous)

(Wasn't bothered to sign in but HAD to review)

Since I can't seem to describe this, the closest thing I can think of is that this is a mixture of Wonderful, beautiful, marvellous, tremendous and grand.

I truly cannot express how much happiness this has brought to me, and continues to bring to me.

I'm sorry, my inner fan girl is screaming at me, wanting to say: I LOVE YOU SO MUCH. I DO. I REALLY DO. FHLADFLASKJDLKJ.

That is all from me. Take your time updating, because as long of a while as took this chapter to be updated, it was well worth it. Much more than that even. Thank you so much for this pleasure.

Masaki and Isshin! KYYAH! *dies from heart attack* *revives* I love this story! one thing though... I too was also given this advice, but you need to put more actions into it! just a bit mroe! otehrwise *stars in eyes* ITS PERFECT! lol update soony?