Really good story. Thanks

Loved this chapter.

Thinking ahead, Eli will know that Logan and V are not dead, but everyone else will be devastated! Poor Papa Mars. :(

Jake Kane was a bit of a surprise, but a good one. I'm sensing Duncan in here somewhere. I always thought that Jake had not clue where Duncan was, but he does, and with Australia being the final destination...

Wiedman was also another character I had a strange like of. I think it really grew when he killed Aaron. Lol.

I have a fondness for Dick as well. I always felt he showed classic distraction tendencies to avoid dealing with his life. Much like most of the main characters of VM did. But it's good to see a scene like this where we get to see him be rather nice. It allows us to like him a bit more.

TV has a tendency to make characters shallow. Honestly, in real life there should be no way that a Veronica would have had anything to do with either Logan or Dick given their horrible actions throughout season 1. Too much was left off the screen to believe fairly that Logan and Veronica was soul mates, which is why fanfiction comes in so handily. ;)

I remember watching an interview with the cast a few years back; Logan wasn't intended to be for Veronica at all; Duncan was. At the midway point the director decided to change directions and put Logan with Veronica. Jason was mortified; he'd spent all of the time developing his character with a natural loathing for the Veronica character, and he was supposed to believably change his tune? There would be too much for him to reasonably over-come: the harassment, abuse, salt-licks, drugs at the party that had a definite effect on V's life. The only place I reasonably see Veronica and Logan together is in fanfiction. :)

I like how you're creating a new direction for these characters. Got a feeling Gory and the mob are going to be a mucho problemo.

Glad to see that they're breaking up in the next chapter according to the notes above. I want to scream at Veronica at this point.

The Madison aspect was over-played and ridiculous. For such a smart person she is so often an insecure, silly girls. The people she leaves in her wake are those she uses to dull her own pain. It was hard for me to watch both season 3 and 4.

Now V and Piz are letting Wallace and Mac think the baby is Piz's. Nooo

I so hope Piz isn't around long.

I don't like him letting Keith believe baby is his. I'm guessing the baby is Logan's and V hasn't even told him.

Now the "sex tape" will have her topless, sobbing, and saying she's pregnant. That is going to be horrible for V.

Fabulous job. I will be looking forward to the sequel someday.

OMG. This is such a great AU story. I really enjoyed this, although I am sad it is over. Can't the story continue? :)

Thanks,

Why do you make Logan apologize for everything? Veronica was wrong and yet he's apologizing? That isn't how it should go

Kept me interested enough to read to the end, but very disappointed in the rating. This fix should be PG 13, not M. The only reason I started reading was bc I thought it was M. Cute fic overall.

I love love love this story sorry to see it end thought.

Is this finished or is there a but more, I absolutely loved it though I think they needed more money lol 200,000 isn't a lot , Australia is expensive. I don't think piz and and Parker shoukd have been there lets face it they didn't really belong in season 3 either lol maybe a few eps but yea that's it they dust fit. I love this story though it was really thought out and executed well, thank you for it.

How are they buying a resort with $200,000?

There is no way she would let her dad think she was dead. That's so sad, he doesn't have anyone else!

This Veronica is a little too spastic. I guess it is the hormones?