Good job!

wtf good

Aww :3 I really liked it :) Bakura is keeping a promise, which is nice and strange XD Great job :D

Very nice...loved it. It was perfect in a sadistic, gothic, edgy kinda way. Anyway, it's goin in my favs.

Kit

Oh my god... this is just... brilliant!

I love it.

This line is my favourite;

"I can feel the blood. I feel dirty. It’s everywhere, soaked all over Yugi’s face, over my clothes and the bed.

And yet, if you asked I’d still say Vampires."

Poor poor Bakura.

But I love tragic endings.

This made me feel so sad.

Good work!