LOVE LOVE LOVE :) McGee definately got some hot points in my book after that description :)

I thank you immensely for telling me of this beginning! :D for i loved it greatly! :D i'm off to read more!

Loved it! ;)

Ummm...guh? 3

I have never loved McGee more than I do now. Thank you for that.

Holy .. . hot damn that was good! Never have I read such a realistic fanfic based off of such an awesome show!

Reow!

Hope you continued elsewhere...

*blinkblink* *drol* Nice. I like the descriptions and wording. It was pretty much epic-awesome. _ Keep up the awesome work

I read the other Abby / Tim / Tony stories (or the series) and decided to write a review. It is very difficult to write mature material about 3 people because writing about the emotions, feelings and actions of three people - and making it all very interesting - is no easy task BUT YOU MAKE IT SEEM EASY! The progression of the actions and emotions of Tim and Tony is excellent with Abby being the stable middle is excellent. I also enjoyed your descrptions and contrasts of male and female bodies, their responses, separate sensations, etc. GREAT JOB!

My heart is still racing! Very hot!

I'd love to read some type of follow-up where Tony and McGee interact. :)

ohh wow Amber! that was steamy hot hun! great!

That was fabulous!

well done ::grins::

Can I just say wow! You paint such a vivid picture just damn! ;)

I will never look at the 3 of them together again in the same way!

Well, Ziva did rate Tim's ass higher than Tony's.