Reviews for Zero's Familiar: Unfortunate One
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17
Im appaled that the tristanians doesnt recognize English as Albion language
Kyle chapter 4 . 12/7/2019
Steve sure has a lot of 'issues' mainly what he is lacking is Godly morals. Up till the 60s even if you weren't a Christian you still generally had Godly morals and without it your no better then a hot head.

The Christian Crusaders before you bring them up as your (fail point) are not Godly at all actually and care more about the 'church' and will be one of those that bang on the gates of heaven which God will ask "Who are you? You cast out demons in my name but you don't honor me."
Kyle chapter 2 . 12/6/2019
So instead of fixing our own country (and it's defenses) we blow up others hoping to find the invisible terrorists.
Kyle chapter 1 . 12/6/2019
Unless you have severe brain damage or are an egomaniac people would want to play games to get AWAY from the war not think it 24/7. This is DEFINITELY fiction so unless your going to try to pass this off in any way as reality I'll refrain from saying more.
TMI Fairy chapter 1 . 9/23/2019
Rampant fanboism spotted!
:)
Sunrayz chapter 13 . 4/25/2019
it has been longer than three months, you covkwomble. either you were oofed in afghan or you forgot, and I hope its the latter. gg
trninjakiller chapter 1 . 10/1/2017
Iraq was another pointless war. It was our modern Vietnam.
SabatonFan6000 chapter 13 . 8/13/2016
Hmm next chap right away explain the 8 years of waiting...
TheLazyHaiku chapter 4 . 3/13/2015
What? No tampons?
trninjakiller chapter 2 . 1/22/2015
That is the most retarded private I have ever seen. He has no idea how to fire a fully auto weapon. He wastes precious ammo just to kill 12 people. In the us military he would probably be demoted.
Kamzil118 chapter 13 . 6/12/2014
Very enjoyable from my view.
coronadomontes chapter 13 . 1/11/2014
un gran fanfic, deberian hacer mas capitulos
weasel AKA boundedsumo chapter 13 . 5/7/2013
awsome, can't wait for the next update
weasel AKA boundedsumo chapter 3 . 5/7/2013
epic
Diresquirrel chapter 13 . 4/23/2011
You have a pretty damn awesome story going on here. I know it might be abandoned at this point, but I do hope you keep it going. It has the feel of some really good military science fiction I've read in the past, but still captures the essence of Zero at the same time.

Thanks for sharing even this much.
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