I don't see why Gwen should apologize, what she said about Charmcaster is entirely true. As a matter of fact Charmcaster should be the one to at the very least apologize for her violent reaction.
Ben, and you the author by extension, are rather hypocritical in this story, everyone get belittle for every imaginary slight against Charmcaster but apparently she can do no wrong and is always immediately declare completly innocent no matter what she does.

I liked this story a lot. It was one of the best I read but you should have written a few more chapters. Maybe 2? and then I could say that this was dope.

No estaba tan buena

Well I loved every second of this hope there's a few sequels in the works plenty more you can do.

very good

ok sem

Unbelievable story

Good story ! I hope there is sequel !

GAHHH! This was amazing. I always loved Ben x Charmcaster. So this was awesome for me. Thanks. ;D

:-)

what is this

Oh my gosh it's beautiful! I was like crazy for hours wanting more when I read this. I liked the scene where Charmcaster stared into Ben's eyes, wanting to kiss him, that's where I went like soooo maad. I so waaaant a sequel. One with Darkstar in it.

This should be a real episode of Ben 10. You made a plot worth the attention of the writers of the series. You even surpassed their skills. You did a marvelous job in writing this. And by the way, you made a good decision in shipping Ben and Charmcaster. It's way better than Ben and Julie. The "BenLie" love team has no chemistry. Anyway, please write a sequel if you want to. God bless you and I pray for you to have the wisdom of Solomon.

Awwwwwhappy ending

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