"Honestly, that girl, she went on like my mother sometimes."

What mother? Harry doesn't have a mother. I think you meant:

"Honestly, that girl, she goes on as if she were a mother sometimes."

Either way though it doesn't sound like something Harry would say. At least not without prompting a moment of angst about not having a mother anyway, which would prompt him to avoid thinking things like that in the future if just to avoid crap like that.

A most enjoyable story. Very well written and your Beta is great. I have to wonder though, why you haven't written on it since 2009. "Old Crow" recommended this story as one of his favorites and upon reading what you've written I can see why. I have done a Favor/ Save on both story and writer, so that I will be able to see any new material you write on this, or any other stories write.
Thanks,
Ron Pate
Traveler301

I'm enjoying this so far and hoping for more. Thanks for sharing it with us.

In relation to the 25 hereditary seats of the Wizengamot. That's not a democracy its an oligarchy.

Remus attending or teaching at any school on the day of the the full moon is a deadly threat. Accidents happen.

Good story.

RL getting to you?

More please

great story thank you

Been very much enjoying this so far, especially since so few fics seem to actually show an "apprentice" tack in terms of HP's training to advance magically.

Can't wait to see where the rest of this ends up, and I especially have to say your use of perspectives and overall writing style is quite interesting - sometimes I got a little confused by the timing of some scenes, only to have the flashbacks merge back into the story in a dawning of comprehension. Overall very fun, and I wish you luck with any and all other projects you're currently working on!

Sincerely

M*T*D*L*

I enjoyed this story. Really well done, new and original. Thanks for writing and sharing.

I have a feeling that some troll(s) got under your skin and caused you to quit writing this story. It's almost a decade too late, but I found the story quite engaging and entertaining, despite the technical errors. Sorry you quit writing it.

TEA BAGS! blasphemy
no PROPER (traditional) English Man be he mundane or Magical would use such things!

sorry but it is big deal to most English, as they refer to those as "full of floor sweepings"

I like your writing style and admire you ability to craft an interesting story. Yes, you have some minor problems with spelling, proofing, and grammar. I don't think those problems add to the story, but I don't think they detract enough to not admire your style and plot. Keep in mind, the more you practice writing and incorporate constructive criticism the better your writing and stories will become. Keep up the good work!

good

WHy are the characters in the summary, harry and flitwick. I don't think you have even mentioned flitwick

Hello
Great story, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Please don't abandon