That was a cute story!

More on my last comment, you know how Jessie and James are always kind of sily. You characterized them well in the beginning chapter. I would have liked to have had more of those personalities present, maybe even having Jessie and James follow Ash and the alternates into the rift somehow. That would have created more interesting potential interactions.

Good story, but I would have liked to have seen more of the old Team Rocket. They add comedy, and since Jecy and Jamez didn't really have their personalities, it didn't feel exactly the same. I did like how Meowth was characterized, though.

This is a really great story. This would actually work well for an actual episode of the Pokemon Anime episode, or even a movie.

This was rather amusing, and I liked it.

This is awesome! I love it! Thou I feel bad for red... Poor red he now in prison.

Another great one! This is pretty cool! You write excellent fanfiction, I wish you'd do more! That's quite a twist, a nice version of Jessie, James, and Meowth and an evil version of Ash. Whoa! If you write a sequel to this, I'd love to see what Brock and Misty's mirror-world counterparts are like as well as the counterparts of a few of the other charachters like Duplica.
Again, great story!

Wow. I am definitely looking forward to reading more of your writing.

Well written, I liked the way the characters came off. The battle was nice. Ash's intuition against careful study. Misty's little development towards the end was done with just the right amount of finesse.

I recommend this heartily.

Absolutely awesome! I just LOVED it, and how you portrayed the entire cast! (Shame that the previous review foretold some of the scenes, though - aaaaargh! I'm SO mad!) Anyway, the fic was perfect from beginning to end, and was such a pleasure to read! You have an incredible talent - gonna read your next one as soon as I get the chance! Btw, thanks for posting a reivew to my fic, too! xxxx me

What an ending! Pikachu risked its own life to save its counterpart-and Ash helped out, as did Jamez' Bellsprout, now an evolved Weepinbell!

Sorry, I couldn't log in, but I had to tell you that I am thoroughly enjoying this fic - very well thought out and clearly written. Even with the alternate universes invovled, it makes a lot of sense to me, despite the fact that I don't usually read science fiction, or enjoy it for that matter. A great story! I hope you can continue this ASAP. Nice touches of humor, too!

Wow this is very good. much beter that the messed Ash Vs, Ashton fic. 9.5/10 (that's high praise, k) - .5 for forgetting that bulbasaur is part poison and would faint at a single psychic.

YOU MUST CONTINUE! :(

One of the coolest stories I've ever saw! Continue your story PPLLLLEEEAAASSEE!