Reviews for Temper the Soul
Guest chapter 16 . 1/20
I must say this is no way near Whiterain. The characters are bland, too much OC and they run around the subject of to have sex or not to have sex. I stopped reading at this chapter but I'm pretty sure there isn't anything in this to make it rated M. I've read stories with more heat in the T section O_o But this is an old story and you obviously grown a lot as a writer since 2002. I think Whiterain is a masterpiece.
Guest chapter 10 . 1/19
Is Duo an idiot in the show? I actually dont remember much about him except the long brain and he was a good pilot. In this story he seems an idiot though. He talks a lot about Heero's personal life to strangers like Julia and Damion. I wouldn't want a friend like that :/
Guest chapter 7 . 1/19
nope dont like them :/
Guest chapter 6 . 1/19
its so forced. Heero was so very sure about what he wanted in the prequel but from one day to the next he became an idiot...again. There was no in between. And Relena kissing the prince was cringe worthy. I think she's stronger and smarter than that.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/19
I liked the prequel much more. While there was a lot of OC (Damion) in there too this has even more. Damion in not my cuppa. He's too goody two shoes, almost a gary stu. I prefer the silent bad boy type in fictions.
Sakura Kaoru-Chan chapter 31 . 9/28/2016
This was truly a beautiful and well-written story. I couldn't put it down until I finished
justwildbeat-rhythmemotion chapter 31 . 7/13/2015
Great work, honestly it was a pleasure to read
kansa chapter 31 . 4/7/2015
Thank you for this sequal! I love continuations of good stories and characters. Would have liked to have read more about 1xR, though D&A was a wonderful love story too. Missed seeing the gundams this time.
arharge chapter 21 . 3/21/2015
Still loving this story but what is up with chapter 21 not a fan of all the italics
arharge chapter 13 . 3/20/2015
I don't usually review an already completed story until the very end, but this story is too good. I just finished chapter 13 and the scene between Heero and Relena beneath the tree is perfection. Heero being so open was too lovely for words. I'll definitely keep reading this story, fingers crossed for a happy ending all around though.
anigery chapter 31 . 1/8/2015
I just cant stop reading youre works. You are indeed a great writer! The way you right the action to romance is great. Well I hope you still write 1xR fanfic this year! Thanks for making a awesome fanfic of this couple
Revy679 chapter 31 . 3/24/2013
This story was truly a journey of emotions, not unlike the human journey through life. It's all written and your attention to detail is quite well timed. I personally would love to see your interpretation of a follow up or even just a separate story specifically with Heero and Relena with pregnancy, birth, kids and how they cope. Haha! A comedy of errors no doubt, but I know inspiration is key. Thank you once again for sharing your incredible talent.
Revy679 chapter 30 . 3/24/2013
Omg! Heero envisioning the kids. .. So totally amazeballs! Seriously!
Revy679 chapter 18 . 3/23/2013
I love Sally and the Gundam Pilots reaction to the news from Heero! OMG especially WUFEI! Classic!
Revy679 chapter 17 . 3/22/2013
OMG! That was...I don't even know if I can find the words! I am light headed and dizzy with so much happiness! BEAUTIFUL!
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