This is one of story that I scared to read it again. Bacause it too much. Too sad. Too heart breaking.
It will be long before I read this again.

I read this all in one go, and first I'll say that I appreciate the effort you put into this, finishing such a long story takes perseverance. Nevertheless, your style, plot, characterization and language were all beautiful, heart-wrenchingly so. At the same time, I don't think I can bear to read this again. I hate Mukuro, Tsuna and Reborn, for being selfish, ignorant, hypocritical, uncaring...bastards. The other guardians weren't much better, pretending everything's alright when it's obviously not. I still love Hibari, and sad for him and Ren. Mukuro and Tsuna don't deserve to be happy and forget, they should bear the guilt for the rest of their lives.

ARRRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH
So FRUSTRATING! *rages*

This was a fitting ending, but that doesn't mean that the story was any less frustrating... T-T
And what makes me even more mad is that this fanfic was so wonderfully written, with the interchanging present/past stories.

As a strict 6918 shipper, I just want to CRY MY HEAD OFF AND BURST INTO ASHES LIKE -
...I'll stop talking, this is making me depressed even more... TT-TT

The most frustrating thing would be: First chapter? Hibari is dead! :DDDDD (WHAT do you MEAN)
The most wonderfully incorporated thing would be: The OC, Ren. He was such a great character, I would really have liked to see him happy... He was alone for so long, poor guy. *hugs remnants of Ren*

In any case, it was a great story, although IwantedtokillTsunaandeveryoneelsewhogotinbetweenHibariMukuroandRen'slife BUUTT That's not the matter~~~

This is too long of a comment... Sorry. XD

Thanks for writing! :D (also thanks for my broken heart HAHAAAAA)

I've read and known this story for a long time now, and although I have completely gone through different fandoms and even accounts, I gotta say, whenever I think of complete angst my mind just goes back to this one. It's just gorgeous and heartbreaking all over. Amano-sensei never really gave much background to Hibari, but I imagine that if she did, it would probably look devastating like this one (w/o the Mpreg and slash pairings obviously but ofc a fujoshi can dream of yaoi in her shounen manga right?)

This story has and always will stay with me now and forever (at least until my memory fails me, just like Mukuro's did)

Ren, you're just a child, but why did you have to experience all of this? you saw your father die in front of your eyes, you bear the brunt of the suffering of your own father. And when children your age can live a normal live, nobody cares about you.
Ren... :'(

This is so sad. I'm reading all of the chapter in one night and I cry for the whole niht chapter after chapter. It so painful trying to read all of it but I can't stop. I end up cannot sleep but when I slept, I dream of what life Hibari and Ren would have if their have an happy ending. I end up being gloomy for the rest of the day. Now I'm kinda fearing if I would end up being like Hibari, falling in love with someone who cannot love you but hurt you in return and you cannot hate him for it plus you want him to be happily ever after. I love Hibari the most among all KHR! cast so it so sad when he end up with sad ending when then story is about him and not Sawada Tsunayoshi. I hate him themost here and Reborn.

Honestly, this is the most tear-inducing piece of story I've read in quite a long time. Every chapter made me want to cry. It relates so well to what I'm going through right now as well, I'm pining for someone who just doesn't see me like he does with her. I'm trying really hard to let go of things, telling myself it's no use to yearn for someone who can't look at you the same way he does to another. I think I'm going through the same resignation phase as Kyoya did, and boy, it hurts a lot.

Thanks for making my day with this story. Wish me luck on moving on before I meet my end like Kyoya did.

I've already read this fic thousand time, amd still cried.

I always imagining that kyouya and ren life faaaar away with dino orz

*ps : but it'll be loved if you write sequel.*

Love,

Ren

(p.s.s: tsuna being jerk in here.)

*Sobs* why reborn...why did you have to kill him... why couldnt you just let hibari go... he was still reliable...*sobs again* Damn you mukuro... why did he have to be a jerk and tear hibaris life into pieces, then leave and let kyouyas son deal with all the pieces... *sits in conner and cries*

Well this has aclomplished a goal, it made me cry. I barely cry.. and it made me cry.. Loved the story... so now I am going to make plans on writing a big fic on making mukuro life hell.

I hate Reborn who murdered Hibari and Ren. But I'm much more hated Mukuro who make them suffer.

Why Mukuro let Ren died? After what he did on Hibari Kyoya and Ren in the past? If I could kill him, I'll kill him. Because in this fict that he deserved to die !

Sob. TT_TT.

Hmm.. I guess I also wanted to mention one more thing. I couldn't decied how I felt about mukuro. I pited him sometimes for his fate. I hated him sometimes for his ignorance. I have mixed feelings when he asked to forget because he couldnt handle the truth. And I do not know how to respond to the thought of forgetting the dead because I pity the dead for being forgotten. It is a bit arrogent of me bevause I will be dead one day as well. And well I think I will stop talking now

I love your story. You pieced it together very well. I cried 4 times for Ren. He a innocent; a product repersenting hibari and Mukuro relationship. I wish they spared him from such a life because he deserves more. I couldnt shed a single tear for hibari. He reminds me of myself. And well I could go on explaining all my feelings towards all the characters but I wont bother you with such a troublesome matter. I just wanted to say your characterizing was great; I was able to connect to them on a deeper level

It's the greatest mukuhiba I've ever read, I don't even care what my classmate think about me now for suddenly crying and screaming "HIBARIIIARGHHH!" fortunately there's no teacher at that time in my class. It's seriously pained me to read such sincerety from Hibari, I never fall in love to anyone so I don't understand it at first how could Hibari be so stupid to let Mukuro do as he want, but when I finish reading all 43 chapters in one go, I can't help but cry for Hibari, for how strong his love even though he know it wont be returned, and I can't help but pity Mukuro for being such a stupid blind pineapple, I don't even understand what I am typing about since my tears blur my eyes, I really am praying from the deepest depth of my heart that Hibari actually still alive and leaving peacefuly with Ren, heck, I even prefer him being locked by vindice in that tube thingy, protected from the pain of unrequited love, god, I'll stop rambling and broke my phone keypad, I'll go check more of your story and stop blabbering nonsense here, Argh! I wanna marry this story!