Wow you had a very interesting fic going. Honestly I think that if you were to try you could re-write it evem better than before. Admittedly Gundam Wing was my first Anime followed by Slayers then going into Sailor Moon, ReBoot, Dragon Ball Z, Tenchi Muyo, Yu-Gi-Oh, Pokemon, Rurouni Kenshin, Yu Yu Hakusho, InuYasha, then I found Dragon Ball, Bastard!, Fake, Sorceror on the Rocks, Gun Smith Cats, GTO(Great Teacher Onizuka), eX-Driver, Saiyuki, Ranma 1/2, Samurai Girl Real Bout High School, Rune Soldiers, Descendants of Darkness, Cowboy BeBop, Tenjho Tenge, and Finally Naruto. Admittedly my interest in the fandoms does alternate(though I am ALWAYS reading Gundam Wing fanfictions) I still love all of them(except Sailor Moon I don't ever read fanfiction of that sort since Sailor Monn is what got me started on fanfiction. Now that being said I try not to read stories that have been discontinued cause it angers me that they could do that at teh sudden drop of a hat. Honestly I'd much rather see the original Author re-write the story at some point than some other two-bit Authir that thinks they can write and they end up screwing teh story up completely. It happened tro one of my most favourute stories in the Gundam Wing fandom and boy was I pissed as well as just about every other author or reader taht read it. Probaly why it hasn't been updated/ That being said I'm not sure what type of person you are but most people just don't fall out of something like that. The interest might wane but it is still something that person wil always remember. Honestly I would Love to see you cmoe back to the story and re-write it with your moe mature outlook on life. Hell I'm mature-ish for having two kids but I can also act immature or childish. It is why even as a child I was able to relate so much better with those that were granparents then actual kids my age. I was too mature for teh kids my agefor me to be able to hold any type of intelligent conversation and so I spoke with adults more than I did other children. Now I can relate to both the adults and younger children and teens. It is why all of the children I know come to me when they have a problem or question. I kind of just went off on a rant there but that is life. I do hope at some point you might re consider re-writing this fanfiction as I honestly beliee since you seem to be very mature that you could make this sory ten times as good as the original would have been. I have seen authors take a fandom that seems like it would be geared towards children but truly wasn't meant to be and turn their fanfiction into a work of astounding proportions. Also not sure if you know this as not many of teh Anime fans that I know(which is a LOT) do know this but when Anime is released as well as Manga it is NOT geraed to children like they do here in the is geared to those of age 14 and older. So in saying yes CN fucks everything up because they want to make it seem like the anime is geared towards children of an impressinable age when it was never intended to be shown to children of that age. They do so for their own profits. Hence why I REFUSE to watch anything on CN if I want to see an Anime I either rent it or if I have seen it I go and buy ot or watch it online. So again. You had a wonderful fic here and I certaintly hope to see some more wonerful works of fiction from you in the future.

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more pwease!

I love it so far, please get the next part out soon.

*pic and demon lover chanting* MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! This is sOSOSOSOSOSOOSOSOOSOSO KAWAII!

*eyes wide* OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Sounds neat. Wufei is OOc, but I'm sure there's a reason. After all, this IS only the first chapter. He'll prolly tuffn up...right? I better read more and try to find out:)

:pic: He's being watched. Spooooooky!

itz a good start! could u try to chek out reflections and my fic dimensional destiny sumtime? thx. good fanfic D

Nice, and his wife's name was Meiran, she just called herself Nataku after a chinese legend (I think it was some sort of guardian or protecter, dragon god?). Anyway, good story, please continue.

*blinks* hey, Piccy-san was suppose to be here... *grumbles slightly, shrugs* intereting, though I thought her(his wife) name, or what she called herself, was Nataku, hence the name for his mech. Well, I'm interested, especially as to what Pic's got to do with this all...

Yes, please do continue. I want to see Piccolo "train" (i.e. "beat the crap out of") Wu Fe.

this is a good start but i can't say if i like it or not. i need to know more before i can do that.

Well, it's different. I need another chapter to get a feel for the story.

looking good

Hey A. Nice so far. Hope you have fun writing it, and don't hurt me for not reviewing the others chapters for this one once you write them. You know why. As I said, good so far, slightly AU, right?