Thật không thể chịu nổi nữa, tất cả các nhân vật trong đây não đều bằng 0 à. Bạn đang biến RUKIA KUCHIKI một cô gái xinh đẹp mạnh mẽ, thông minh, luôn cố gắng hết sức thành một con ngu uỷ mị. Bạn đang sỷ nhục cô ấy, cô ấy KHÔNG BAO GIỜ Ngu Xuẩn, Sướt Mướt, Cam Chịu Chấp Nhận trước Khó Khăn, Cầu Xin được cứu dù là đang đối mặt với cái CHẾT. Khốn kiếp, thật khó chịu và ghê tởm khi xem tới đây, bạn dùng cái tính cách rác rưởi của Orihime áp đặt vào cô ấy, cũng như cốt truyện lúc trước. Chết tiệt rác rưởi!

i love ichiruki

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Plz! Update! This story is amazing!

And I stopped here. This story has potential and you can improve. This story is old so it is very likely you grew up past the mistakes you have made here. However I am going to leave my two cents anyway.

Let's start mentioning the good things:
1. Inoue's portrayal, years ago I would have frowned and said Inoue is not that IDIOT and double faced but after the recent chapters and the dress...I can totally see her doing what you have written, so sad but I think she can be this pathetic, childish and double faced...I am going to stop here before I start ranting.
Now the bad things:

1. You mentioned OOC but I didn't think that meant: "they are gonna be idiots" Come on! Rukia is so passive and isn't thinking about a solution just goes around and lets Ulquiora do what he needs, HOW? If he gets the power he wants HER FRIENDS ARE GOING TO DIE ANYWAY so having her acting so passive and not looking for a solution is angering and frustrating. Ichigo is too much of an Idiot here too, come on! I don't see him being with Ori out of pity because It is even more cruel to give her hope in something that is hopeless and have her around to SEE how the world she dreams of is crumbling.
2. The writing until this chapter is LAZY, YOU CAN DO BETTER, the cheap twists, the solution of the situation being kept hindered by cheap ways like walking right and the precise moment or keeping information form the others ...talking about CONVENIENCE, only to keep the story going with a forced drama is frustrating and made me stop, you could have resolved Rukia's situation with Ulquiorra sooner and yet have an story to tell, but you went for the easier way, it would have been a little more difficult but you could have done it.

Well, I am sad that I can't handle the frustration your writing gave me because the story would have been amazing and I was really hooked at the beginning...although I was frowning a lot back then but I could still take it...but just until now...now I quit.

OMG! This plot is one of the interesting ones, it kept me guessing. Keep up the good work!

update pleeeaaasssseeee

NOOOOOOO RUKIA NOOOOOO

ugh no why did ulquiorra do that!

Why the fuck did you bring ulquirra in it? Why can't you guys make it realistic. Renji would be better in his place although you have already made that imposible by closing the soul society to human world or vice versa gate (i don't know the name)

Hi binibining may-akda!

Are you still planning to continue this fanfic? Coz, well, it has already been four years since you last updated... I'm just wondering, that's all.

I hope you are still planning to update because you really have many readers out here waiting for you and your story.

I hope you can get back in writing. I really love your story just like my addiction in your other story, Raining.

Aja! Ganba! :)

waah! i'm frustrated. It's been four years but... I hope the author will remember this fic! I've been close to crying now!

update please

i'm a big fan Hitsuruki too
but ichiruki is awesome

Oh My Gigai! (Uchihan Xairylle-san's trilogy masterpiece) Over three years now Miss Me-anne your work is due for updates! But like I said on my comment to 'Motivations', I will personally attend to your domestic needs and get you your Starbucks or Peets coffee in the middle of the night just so you could continue writing. Oh wait, do you need a massage? A day in a spa?

I refrain from typing in comments until the last chapter because I can't even bring myself to put down my ipad to take a bathroom breaks or take a bath! Geez!

I didn't feel hate towards Inoue (unlike what I felt in 'Odalisque' - Tituba3-san oh my, that one is awesome!) when she insisted herself to Ichigo or anger towards Tatsuki for convincing her to do because at the very start I could clearly see that Ichigo's mind was not in it, there is only little interactions between them and those are something I find just annoying, not hateful. Also, I was not saddened when Rukia was raped because I believed that her gigai was switched to a less advance model when she went to visit Urahara for check up. I'd like to think that Urahara did that to prevent the completion of the Hogyaku therefore making Rukia's honor intact.

I really want to know more and find out what would happen but seeing that the last updates for any of your works was more or less two years ago, I can't help but wonder if you moved on and forget these hardworks of yours. You really have a talent in writing Miss Me-anne (sorry, I assume that's your real name), if I have the means to convince you to continue I really would not hesitate to push you forward. Don't waste your efforts on making this far Wickedsistah1024-san, we fans of yours are still waiting, I for one is ready to jump on the next plane to Manila (or wherever you are, that's how desperate I am) to personally convince you on completing all of your works. Be proud, you're Kubo-san in a gigai! 5/5 zanpakutous for this piece