That was a brilliant and intense story, I couldn't put it down. Thank you for sharing

This is the best pepperony fic ever.

This is one of the best Pepperony fan fics I have ever read. I’m so sad to see that it’s your only story.

Is it over? There's no complete tag and yet, it's been 10 years since this was posted. Welp, if anything, at least you didn't end it on a sad note. If, by any chance, inspiration strikes and you're still writing, I do hope you continue. I'd love to see where you take their relationship and how they handle it. Cheers!

The best Pepperoni story in this site. You portrayed the characters with spot-on accuracy and the storyline was epic!

I loved the part with the chewing gum, such a true statement and yet really funny! Also the idea you had for their customs! Perfectly matches their characters. And whats more you did a pretty good job on portraing the process of them getting closer. You can literally feel their feelings burning up when reading! Please continue!

Wow that was hell of a ride...

I love this! Is there any more chapters coming down?

It was great

This story has had me on edge. There was so much action in it. Your talent in impecable. I absolutely loved this stroy.

Wow! I loved every bit of your fic :)

me encanta tu historia, siguela porfavor no nos puedes dejar asi.

Hell yeah! It's been 6 years since you posted anything, I take that you're not planning a sequel? ;) Too bad :( Would love to read what happens next!

Wow! I thought where would you pick a moment for them to finally kiss and that was unexpected. Usually, people go for "once-the danger-is-over-i-realize-how-much-i-love-you-thing" and you went for "fuck-it-let's-kiss-now-you-never-know-what's-gonna-happen- and- better-change-his-mind-to-make-him-realise-the-gravity-of the-situation" Nice, nice! off to chapter number 19!

Yeah! And the fun begins!

kindest regards,

New reader of yours.