This seems a good story

Great story, not sure if it’s just me or it really fits, but try listening to ‘In My Blood’ by Shawn Mendes while reading chapter 10. :-)

Frfdrdfhhdjrfjdjd that was absolutely amazing! I loved this story and you're an amazingly talented author. I hope you keep on writing :)

You do write well and the story is good. It's just, I am very definitely not a fan of Snape and found it appalling when Rowling gave Harry's second son Snape's name.

Yes, I understood that he couldn't show favoritism to Harry or Gryffindors due to keeping up appearances but he did way more than that by being so hateful to Harry.

Snape is an egotistical, immature man in Canon and no amount of "help" he gave truly makes up for his behavior. But, that's just my opinion and I know many others don't feel the same.

Freeze the pregnancy?! Umm yeah, sure, lol!

Won't his friends notice the difference in his looks? Oh, and in the books, Harry always had black hair, not brown. But yeah, you would think his friends would at least notice that he no longer had James Potter's messy hair.

Oh yeah, yech, yech! Shape as ANYONE'S father!

Biological father? Bullsh*t! I know, he is in your story but if this world and these characters were real, no way in Hell! I will continue reading because it has been a good story but in my mind, no matter how the story goes, I will never accept that.

You know, he still could have entered Harry's mind without the requirement that he be a blood relative. You could have simply had the requirement be someone that had entered his mind before. You didn't need to go and totally ruin the story.

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Snapes sense of humor in this is just cracking me up.

Wait. I thoight in the previous chapters it said repeatedly that harry doesnt have his wand. When did he suddenly get it back, just in time for this fight?

First you make Harry get beaten, THEN get run over BY A CAR!

Love that his Phoenix is laughing at him. Lol

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This would have been awesome if you had not included Weasley and Granger. They are just not needed in Harry/Severus life even though they are Harry's friends. He spent the whole summer without anything from them. This is a great story.

This story is amazing, fantastic, and lovely...

Yeah...the 'Occlumency' reason for Snape being able to hear Harry's mental plea is very difficult to accept.