No puedo creerlo acabas de romper mi corazón en que planeta narcissa podría estar embarazada, no lo acepto , no.

Hermione’s middle name is Jean, not Jane. Well established in canon. Just FYI. Still loving this!

I have been madly enjoying this creative, beautifully written, grammatically near-perfect story, nut when you deployed Harry Dresden it just kindled my delight to new heights and made me laugh immoderately. Well done, I say!
I came to this story late and have a long way, but I anticipate equal delight in the remainder. Thank you for this most excellent read.

So far I’m enjoying this awesome book

love the shoutout to The Dresden Files!

i think i like how the story end i was serious in how it would develop in the beginning that why i finished reading the story in 3 days i'm quite pleased by the end
i was not sure about a relationship like that in beginning of the story but seeing from the storyteller perspective i could the reasons
all in all its realy a great story

Honestly, I do not approve. If you are already married, it is wrong to pursue another relationship because it wouldn't be fair to either of them. Either divorce or don't pursue. That's only my opinion on this matter. Other people's opinions would be way different than mine.

Yay for Harry not being dumb! lol

Im kinda torn on the whole Harry/Ginny thing, on one hand I think that maybe if Ginny told her mom to shove it then they could maybe work it out and on the other I don't think she even particularly wants to be out from under her mom's thumb so it doesn't matter anyway. Not gonna lie, if Ginny doesn't stand up to her then I'm kinda hoping Harry gets a divorce lol

That's sad, I really wish you had written Ron with some more sensitivity because I really think he would have had it, even as a portrait. He loved Hermione and maybe he wouldnt have understood and maybe he would have been angry but i think in the end he would have wanted her to be happy.

Oh yes, let's protect Hermione some more from the horrors of war...that she lived through...makes sense. He should at least be honest with himself, he didn't want Hermione there because he was afraid he would get emotional or maybe even because he was worried what she would think if him, saying that it was because she is pregnant is ridiculous! It's not like she is having a high risk pregnancy, all of this sheltering is so silly! And to not even discuss any of it with her...gah! I especially lived that last bit, 'it would not due for Hermione to see him like this.' What? Vulnerable? Human? But then again comforting him might stews her out and cause the baby to fall out right then and there so we can't have that! Makes me wonder how much say Hermione is really going to have in the raising of her own kids...

Gotta say that I give him kudos for not giving Harry to much crap

Lucius really annoyed me this chapter, he is becoming very high handed and I'm surprised Hermione actually is letting him get away with it. I mean she been going on and on about how controlling Molly is but yet lets Lucius tell her how often she can volunteer plus what she can and can not do when she volunteers and tells her she won't be changing her own babies diaper and then to top it off, invites himself to her lunch with Harry to make sure he doesn't 'upset' her, aka so he can control the conversation if he feels he needs to because obviously with the tension going on with the Weasley's, there is a good chance she could get upset regardless of if it's his fault or not. I mean it said she is only just starting to show which means maybe 4 months along? She's pregnant not made of glass, jeez!

But wait... if she was born Sept 2, 1999 wouldn’t she start Hogwarts in 2011? Since she wouldn’t be 11 before September 1, 2010? That’s why Hermione was 11 when she started and then soon turned 12 after term started.

wow!
this was a long and great fic..
detailed well wrriten and nice

specially I liked this last apedix.. a very good detail

I would liked to know if the rest of weaselys were just like molly or not..

anyway, great fic