Excellent way to show what Colby has been through since the Janus List. I think that you have done a terrific job showing that he has struggled since being found to be a triple agent. I agree with you he is a different colby then when he first started, but different in a good way. I look forward to seeing more stories from you. Thanks for sharing your work.

The idea is fabulous. The bits and pieces really interesting. The execution a bit rough. This story doesn't flow and while that is not always a bad thing it doesn't work as well as some stories use choppy or disjointed flow. I'm not sure how many hits you may have had on the story but I know I hesitated to even read (even though I'm a huge Colby fan) because the summary said experimented when experienced is what I'm sure you meant.

I hope this helps you as a writer. I do so enjoy your attempt to see what might have been Colby's path back to the team and his life.

very good! keep up the great work..

That's avery interesting story and I really can't understand why there are no reviews! It's interesting to read, it's about Colby (-: and it's well-written. So, i can't understand it. But you got one anyway now (-,

I liked this look at Colby. Even though there was no dialogue it was ecxiting. There are some minor typos, but nothing serious.

I would appreciate if if you update soon again (-;

Greetings,

Sachita