I agree with everything you said about Mikoto. And yes, she most difedentally does play favorites; favoring Sasuke over Itachi time and time again...

It makes me sick, but I can't help but feel sorry for her, 'ya know?

How did I miss this one? Seriously? Ilike this. It fits so well into how I like to see Mikoto. Especially with the little references to her betraying both of her sons, and the significance to "Uchiha blood".

Mikoto's insane trip at the end was very well-place. It wraps everything else up and ties it in a nice bow. I like to think that she tries to hard to remember what her sons are like that she completely loses touch with reality. Almost like she's throwing away her memories in favor of those she likes best.

Well done.

Wow... Very VERY introspective, and I mean more-so than usual. I really enjoyed all the precise descriptions and events you chose to demonstrate your point, for example the bunny being killed and Sasuke skipping rocks... All the events seemed very connected despite the lack of an obvious correlation (bunny-rocks don't exist and yet... they do now...). Love the dark Mikoto (as usual) but I have to say that my favorite parts of this particular Uchiha story were

1.) The Mikoto-window. Because everyone TOTALLY looks through her

and my fave of faves 2.) Mikoto being compared to the plate she drops, wanting a graceful death unlike the plate. I have a feeling however that her death is every bit as ungraceful as the plate's. :(

A 100 ;3

-S

Nice, I like how you portrayed her, and the rest of the family.

I missed you! I know what you mean about suffering grades though, ugh, geometry is killing me right now. Anyway, this totally made up for the absence. Every sentence, every word, was just...I don't know, it was mind blowing though and gut wrenching. A fantastic, beautiful piece. Grr, I'm almost frustrated because I don't know how praise you for this. Ugh, I'm so happy right now. Rawr.

I have a new reason to look forward to summer. 3

Cheers!