Lovely lovely fic 3

cool .. ... nicely done...

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voici la vraie rencontre de nanao et son capitaine j'aime aussi ta version mais si tu n'a pas vu la vraie regarde là

I almost cry, this is so amazing, one of the best story I ever read.

Thanks for writing this. I ejoyed reading, and loved it from the beginning to the end.

I can describe this in one word. Breathtaking. This is in my Top 5 Shunsui x Nanao fanfiction. It has got amazing story, meaningful start and the end too, it's just wow. ;)

I love this chapter... I guess it's my favorite one :)

That was just kawaii :3 And that sweet lemon... O/O

They are just cute, and so is your story :3

That end is just... Ah, are you trying to kill me? It's soo exciting, and I can't wait to read another chapter! :D

Lemoooooon... like it so much q

I loved Shunsui in this chpater... he was so cute :33

Pretty much great start of a story :D Really like it :)

This was amazing! And very beautiful, sensual and well written! I also loved that bit with the old man, Genryusai-dono isn't quite the dry stick he pretends to be, I'm glad you added that part. Thanks for the great story!

healing kido. though nanao normally doesn't need it doesn't mean she doesn't know it, as it is part of kidou instruction. she could have healed the hickeys