You captured Lee, Billy and Jamie perfectly! Plus, there were no missing words at the beginning of a sentence in this story, congratulations. Four items of note: (1) Lee always called Jamie "Chief" not "Cowboy." (2) Loved that Lee called Jamie "son" when he said he didn't blame him. (3) Phillip was not among the ones you listed that Lee called his family: "I love you, Jamie. You, your mom, your grandma. You're my family." (4) Loved that Jamie told Lee he's "a great dad." Overall this was a very believable story, which rings true because love and forgiveness are the most powerful, healing words a human can experience!

Very poignant. Good story.

Good story! I would love to read a continuation of this story. Linda

Whoa- make me cry, why don't ya?

This is a plausible, excellent, CAUTIONARY tale that everyone should read.

Very, VERY nicely done.

What a wonderful story! It really made me feel good. Great work.

Great Story!

Very nice Tammy. Very true to life. An accident like this could happen so easily. I love seeing Lee with his stepsons. He deserves happiness with them. And i guess that we have to be the ones to give it to him.

Jenny

Great story!