very cool story

very nice the best one!

I'm so glad you are continuing with this fic - it is one of my favourites!

So many great lines - very bittersweet in their tone which is perfect for this fic. I will be watching eagerly for another update!

I loved this chapter, and the sense of stillness in it. The butterfly was beautiful, and I loved the way that Stella photographed it, as if in response to Coralie's wondering whether it could be evidence for something.

And you conveyed Coralie's sadness perfectly, how she still doesn't know what happened, and is worried about what it could be. I really hope that she didn't commit suicide, for her sake and for her mother's, you wrote her grief very starkly, with the way that she can't even step into the sunshine.

Loved how you described Flack and Angell as flan :D It does seem to fit, I must say that I've never tried Spanish flan though.

I could quote most of this chapter for descriptions, they were wonderful as always, but I most loved the butterfly, and the description of Coralie's breathing. I really hope that you can continue with this.

I love it, it's very well and realistically written and I really could see Coralie's room and the things she sees.

Great to see an update :) Still hoping for some at soem time in the not too distant future for your other stories. Not that I'm pushy or anything... Really enjoyed this, beautifully written with some lovely descriptions. I could almost feel the breeze and the sun, and there was a sense of lightness to the story as well. Loved the continuing image of the butterfly, and the images of lgiht and shadows. I liked how the girl said thank you, even though she's not sure it wil have been heard. But maybe. Loved reading all the thoughts on time and memories and gaps that can be filled or not filled, and I liked the character of the girl as she wants to help both Stella and her parents even though she is in such difficulty herself.

Loved all the thoughts on why, where and how, very realistic, and then the possible answer, 'Maybe I’m still here because something went wrong and I have to set it right. Maybe it’s because some people think that I may have killed myself. Or because of who has killed me. If so, I hope we can find him before he kills someone else.'

Loved this description of Flack's eyes, they are rather beautiful it has to be said XD 'I guess the man standing next to the car must be Flack. I look into a pair of eyes as bright as the sky, blue from horizon to horizon. But I guess there can be clouds too, I see a trace of them when he notices the expression on Stella’s face.' Nice to see a glimpse of Angell, and the connection shared there. Interesting allusion to flan, I've never thought of it that way I have to say! I really loved this description of sea salt and the sensations that it evoked. Looking forward to the story continuing!

this is AMAZING! You have an excellent turn of phrase.

Wow! This is an incredible story! I really enjoyed this story! I look forward to reading more! I hope Stella can figure out what happened to this little girl! Brilliant!

Brilliant chapter! I really enjoyed it! I like the way it flows and the point of view!

Amazing chapter! I really enjoyed it! I love her opinion of Mac and Stella together, wonderful!

Very moving! Very deep! I really enjoyed it!

Interesting chapter! I really enjoyed it!

donuts on the beach, and they also say there's something in NY's tap water that makes pizza taste better. this is a great story, reminds me of all the times my sis and i watched those ghost shows. update soon!

Very intense chapter! I really enjoyed it!

Oh, I loved this chapter. You sense some sort of connection is developing between Stella and Coralie and that Coralie is starting to piece together some clues as to what happened to her.

This is such a lovely fic and I'm thrilled you posted a new chapter. I'm looking forward to reading more.