Like the comment before, I just read through your story and want to read more. Unfortunately, it has been 10 years since your last update and 6 years since you've updated any of the fics in your profile.

You got me with the dialogue, the visuals and the emotions. I don't know if you continue to receive notices when you receive reviews/comments. I hope you do so you can see that you are still getting readers, readers who appreciate you writing and are hoping for more.

I do realize real life takes precedence. I hope all is well with you; and in the off chance that you see your latest reviews and should inspiration and time strike, I hope you are able to regale us once more with and update or two. Thanks and kudos to you on this story.

Ok so it’s 31-12-17 and I’m currently unable to sleep and have been reading this fic for the last two hours (it’s really good btw). I know that there is an extremely small chance that you actually see this comment but I’m begging you to update because I need to know what happens. And in less than 24 hours it will be 2018 and a decade since Iron Man was released and I just need this. Please.

guess you're not writing anymore.. too bad really loved this heartbreaking story! :)

Dios cuando vas a a continuar? por favor !

Heyyyy you haven't updated this in a long time... But you really should! This is great!

I know you haven't updated this fabulous story for 4 years now, but I really really wish you could update this eventually. I hope you haven't lost your interest on this pairing either; you are a great writer and I really want to read more of your writing about pepper and tony.
there are plenty of great unfinished stories I've read before, but this one definitely makes one of them, if not the the best three.
The whole plot IMO is very different in an awesome way, since not many fic shows how Tony can act rather harsh to pepper. and you successfully makes him looks more human that way.

awesome awesome awesome.

so please please update this. I'm really waiting ;)

It was getting better and better, i even cried. And then it stops! WHY?

Wow... this is how, if IM happened in real life, I would expect it to turn out. Excellent writing; you paint a vivid picture of the 'hole' Tony has dug himself into. I hope you come back to this writing, even though it's been 4 years!

Please. :-)

Why have you abandoned this story? I love it!

Please update more

This is sooooooo good! It's been like 3 years but are you ever going to finish this story? I love it so much thank you for writing :)

This was fascinating - what a shame you didn't have the chance to finish it!

"Hey, what could possibly go wrong?"

"You know, every time someone says that, somewhere an idiot dies."

Fabulous dialog in this chapter. :)

You know, I could really picture early morning at a 24 hour Walmart. Nicely written. :)

Oh please keep writing! I wanna know what fury has for tony and he cant let pepper leave! Tony has to change and meet his past or whatever. Loved these 6 chaps. Read em 13 times :)