so fucked.. pardon my french
wish there was an after the fight POV from the thug
really enjoyed this :)

Author-san,

Haha, that ending was GREAT. Shin and Kumiko are just amazing together...

Thanks for sharing your work,

Meiyo

Short.. But very nice! It was very cute.. Especially, the "I know, Sawada," Yankumi said, patting at her stomach. "I promise that he won't even get the chance to hit me!" part and the The kid Fuwa had been beating was still laughing. "You are so fucked, man," he said. "So fucked."..

Full of awesome!

That thug is such a sexist! :-c

haha. this was awesome! loved it.! :D

keep up the good work!

wonder who that kid was.

Hahaha go anonomyous kid! XD

Haha.. The last sentence was awesome! Great job!

Oh my freakin gawd!

I was freakin' laughin' all the way!

you really got me here hahas..

I like-nah- I LOVE IT!

cheers!

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I had to come back to add this story to Favorites. It's at least my third time reading it, and I end up cackling with glee at the end of the story each time. The final line is priceless, and Yankumi and Sawada's ignoring the baddie to bicker with each other is spot on. Thanks for the hilarious and oddly adorable little fic.

Great, great, great! Probably the best description of these two ever! Write more, please?

Lol! that was hilarious. xD the ending line, best ever lol.

xD i love the last line

That was a good laugh. Oh, those poor thugs. Shouldn't somebody warn them?

A fun, easy read. In character, grammatically correct, and the spelling is good! (Arg, what too much fanfic can do to one's standards... lol.) Thanks for sharing!