it was such a wonderful story
why did you leave it

I really don't understand this story. Bella goes on and on for chapters about how Edward isn't himself, how he treats her horribly and all of a sudden after one dinner out and some shopping ALL OF BELLAS DREAMS HAVE COME TRUE?

Bella has mental health issues? Shes so fucking stupid in this...

Do everyone a favor writer, dont EVER say yummy. Its so fucking childish. Everytime I read that i lose respect for the character.

Bella FALLS off her bed EVERYNIGHT?

That really doesn't even make sense. When I read that all I could think was "what the fuck?".

It was so out of place and weird.

So hes a complete douche...and bella HATES HIM...then he buys her a dress and wants to give her a present and BAM she wants to kiss him...and the food is "VERY YUMMY" what is she a fucking retard? First off...shes not a child so NOTHING should be "yummy" Second she hates people that don't buy her things? cause the second he bought her something her tune sure changed...she bitching about working all day...what work? who in the fuck cant sleep in a twin bed? who falls off of one EVERYDAY...heres the main point...im embarrassed that you posted this, its total shit. There is no plot...no character development...nothing

first off this is written really poorly. Second what the fuck is going on? Bella knew Edward before? what was his relationship to her? Why would he all of a sudden turn into this pos we are reading about? I just don't get it.

He's an ass

PLEASE FINISH! I can't stand it. I need to know if we go back to team Edward and live happily ever after

I think u hav written an amazing story. edwards behavior at first,had me wanting to hit him. I hate that he kept bella I love it that he is bk.I'm a sucker for soul mate kinder would be hapi with they not way she feels when he's close by is a strong poor jacob is caught in between.I hope he finds his sadly in this story its not bella

Wow! I love this story so much - its awesome!

Love it so far
Just one question how can the vampires drink wine?

Once trust is lost it takes time to get it back. Good chapter. Thanks

I know I can be a sucker for romance but why do I have a feeling the ride will be getting bumpy again? Really enjoyable chapter.

I am enthralled by this story. Again I apologise for not revivewing sooner. I just couldn't stop reading because I needed to see where you were taking us. Still not too sure but I'm enjoying the ride.. Thank you.

Hello. I just started reading this story. It is very intriguing. I think an appropriate song for this chapter/story would be "Over and Out" by the Foo Fighters. Check it out and listen to the lyrics. Thanks, Suzan Noerr

Kul