lovely and magical, everyone cares so much, and does their best

I love happy endings and this story was lovely

Continue!

ummmm this story is about minako and kunzite. focused on those two actually.
just wondering why it was makoto and nephrite. didn't read the last chapter but just made a comment, when i noticed the description on my way to chapter 10. i don't mind the shitennou/senshi but what bothers me is the description. actually it was a nice story, but the description just blew it all off.

Poor tortured Kunzite and Minako. They were always bakas when in came to their own relationship.

Nicely written.

You kinda left a lot of things out that you set up in the beginning, like anything that happened with Urawa. And Asanuma.

I was under the impression that the story was supposed to be about the Senshi's other possible love interests and how they deal with the Shittenou. But they sort of disappear and the Senshi fall in love off screen. The constant skipping around makes the whole thing a bit weak.

But the story picks up with Minako's pregnancy. I see a definite improvement over the course of the whole thing. Keep at it.

I'm glad that Minako and Kunzite finally got their act together and got together. Nice ending chapter. That's all I really have to say unfortunately.

I feel like I missed something here are the end. What happened in the hospital or to the baby?

Please finish this.

These are very interesting. So far this one touched me the most as I can relate to it.

I really like this please keep the chapters comming!

I already said it once on LJ, but I will say it again that I love you for this update. Still, all that tension is killing me. Please give us the next chapter already!

Too many cliff hangers! Just end the story already, and it better be an ending where Minako and Kunzite end up together! ;;shakes fist;; end it that way or else!

Wonderfully wrenching and poignant. I always enjoy your take on Nephrite and Kunzite.