| Reviews for Third Time's the Charm |
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Eru chapter 1 . 6/1 Yay! Now the whole series feels complete.. the emotional payoff my friend.. is here! |
Musings chapter 1 . 3/14 This, of course, is the weaker ending. The best thing about it, from a writer’s perspective, is, that you haven‘t included it in your original story. The bittersweetness, the significance of death and the knowledge that we can‘t change everything, even if we give it our best, is an important lesson to learn while growing up. Life writes the most wonderful, most terrible stories and when our work reflects this multifacetedness it becomes art. |
ironhair chapter 1 . 8/15/2019 Much better ending. Thanks. |
bleeb90 chapter 1 . 5/19/2019 Beautiful! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2015 Thank you for giving us an ending. Especially one that ends on a happy note. |
CDR. Grae chapter 1 . 9/12/2014 Alright, I'm SUPER GLAD you decided to write a story where Percy confesses. Most authors would just leave us readers hanging around in suspense, making us imagine the situation if Percy told the whole family (or maybe just one member in particular) the truth. Good thing you didn't do that to us. And I actually forgot that bet he made with... I think it was Penelope, but yeah, whatever, in the Quidditch Match. It suited his time-travel situation. How do you DO it?! I can hardly piece some of the events together, especially the years! I'm not really the sharpest tool in the shed when it comes to Math. I LOVE the ending! Typical Fred, I bet he's going to bet his and George's whole savings and earnings in that World Cup. It's thrilling and at the same time, hilarious! :D |
armysugakookie chapter 1 . 8/29/2014 i love the ending! before its angst, and now it's humor! yah! xDD |
Lifedrops chapter 1 . 7/31/2012 Oh Freddalupe!You and your jokes...I hate how everyone blames Percy for the death...But hey,I bet Fred's up there causing mayhem and tormenting Snape(then running away from the angry redhead also known as Lily Evans)with the Marauders and Fabian with Gideon sharing embarassing stories of his mother and ,I guess Fred has a pretty awesome all, 'it's the living one should pity,not the dead'. Okay,I'm done now... LIFEDROPS |
Shongs1 chapter 1 . 1/25/2012 Yay, I loved the ending. I love how you ended it on a humorous note. Keep up the great work! :DDDDD |
In The Mix chapter 1 . 5/29/2011 That is so like Fred. I'm glad you wrote him being saved too. |
FatesShadow83 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011 LOL! Wonderful! |
Heretogetthestory chapter 1 . 8/18/2010 I AM ssssooo happy you did this sequel it was great. |
FrostedMidnight chapter 1 . 7/21/2010 I loved this one as well, thanks for a great read! |
DMeg714201 chapter 1 . 4/6/2010 OMG! I LOVE IT! B-R-I-L-L-I-A-N-T! Usually I Dont Read One Shots BuT This Is Actually Amazing! |
Stickman-sam chapter 1 . 9/28/2008 Beautiful story :) Really happy that Fred didn't die this time, but I was thinking that he should have more reaction to Percy time travelling. |