| Reviews for Evening Falls |
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  elizabeth chapter 29 . 4/14 hey, i literally read both stories in four hours (i'm a slow reader lol) and absolutely loved them! a long shot, but i was wondering if you happened to still be updating? i'm planning on rereading anyways haha :) |
 Frioviss chapter 29 . 4/8 I'm somewhat disappointed there was barely anything about Volturi and their reactions towards Elisa. Can't say I'm surprised that this story was abandoned but thanks for writing it. |
| Gillian chapter 27 . 12/28/2019 I love this story! I hope you are doing well and I wish you the best of luck. Your writing inspires me! |
| Guest chapter 29 . 6/27/2019 Thanks for writing this. It's far better than most fanfics, Twilight or not. I really enjoyed it and Extraordinary and hope you can post the rest of the summary so we can see how it ends. |
| Guest chapter 29 . 6/4/2019 This fanfic is a real diamond among a sea of rocks. Honestly i hope you change your mind about finishing it, i really want to know what happens with Sebastian and possibly Jane, if the Volturi meet her. And how her power(s) develop! Great job! I love how you made Tandy and Jimmy relationship with her as good friends. Id love to see if her friends will eventually know about vampires as well, maybe Tandy’s meth using brother might become one? Idk Its really an amazing fic! |
| Shirley chapter 28 . 9/26/2018 I love this story! be a great movie! hope u continue it! bravo to u! |
| Kageyjay chapter 26 . 9/14/2018 Elisa's 'dad' is so wrong! I wonder who he really is? Whoever he is, he's not telling her anything good. Elisa finally figured out what's happening to her. Now everyone knows. How will she use it? |
| Kageyjay chapter 25 . 9/14/2018 What happened during the test was weird. So much for Jimmy. Alice is back! I'm glad she saw the candle. When she told Elisa thank you for lighting her way home, it was beautiful. |
| Kageyjay chapter 24 . 9/14/2018 Alice's mother his Cynthia? Their parents even harmed Cynthia! I wonder what the rest of her life was like? So Elosa and Jasper made up. The scrapbooks Esme made were a treasure. |
| Kageyjay chapter 23 . 9/14/2018 Sorry about the store not being Nancy's. I love the idea of the candle in the window. |
| Kageyjay chapter 22 . 9/14/2018 So much for their first kiss. And, Sebastian is still a threat. |
| Kageyjay chapter 21 . 9/14/2018 Alice's memories. Of before she went to the asylum. hmm |
| Kageyjay chapter 20 . 9/14/2018 Sorry Bella. At least you have Edward, who loves you. |
| Kageyjay chapter 19 . 9/14/2018 Bella sure wasn't immune to the struggles of a newborn like canon! Of course this isn't. She did a lot of damage! |
| Kageyjay chapter 18 . 9/14/2018 Elisa's ability to go back in time a little, saved Bella! At least's it's useful. |
